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January 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
about #63...
Thanks for the mention.
I think Blaise is being stupid...or just a typical child na
Thanks for the mention.
I think Blaise is being stupid...or just a typical child na
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January 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
about #62...
Maaan! This is getting complexed! I really look forward to the day, Dash is allowed to
cut loose again, like at the Ball only more so...and what happened to Draco's snake? You
don't mention him.
Maaan! This is getting complexed! I really look forward to the day, Dash is allowed to
cut loose again, like at the Ball only more so...and what happened to Draco's snake? You
don't mention him.
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January 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Love the story! Only wished you posted everyday!
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January 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This chapter...this chapter... Wow. Wonderful. Goddamn, why can't the actual books be this good? I mean they are, but something about a well written fanfic is just so much better. Again, I love the interactions between Harry and his dad, Snape, and seeing Harry reaching more and more out to the man. The slow build is a smart choice because it makes these scenes delicious to read. *I 'awwwwed' when Harry hugged Snape.* And just watching Dumblefuck fall from grace further and further is delicious as well. It's great to see Harry standing up to this disaster of a human being. As much as I hate the following sheep that are the wizarding world, should they ever catch wind of what Dumbledork is doing within the walls of Hogwarts around their children... Well, I'm sure Snape and Malfoy won't loose any sleep. In fact, I hope Malfoy catches wind of this and can use it. It also makes me wonder what Ron and his family would do if they knew what Dumbledork had been doing to Harry all this while? Do you think they would still support him? All in all, another great chapter.
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December 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
oh my freakin' gosh... testing him my foot. Harry knew not to trust Dumbledore and if Dumbledore HAD managed to take over control of Harry... 'oh hey, just testing out if you are ready for Voldemort... here's your mind back... oh wait I succeeded so I guess that means you're not ready... I'll just keep your mind to myself since I know best." Crazy old coot. I also did not see that coming. Good job surprising me :)
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December 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
oh my freakin' gosh... testing him my foot. Harry knew not to trust Dumbledore and if Dumbledore HAD managed to take over control of Harry... 'oh hey, just testing out if you are ready for Voldemort... here's your mind back... oh wait I succeeded so I guess that means you're not ready... I'll just keep your mind to myself since I know best." Crazy old coot. I also did not see that coming. Good job surprising me :)
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December 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #61...
For a second I thought we were going to have a serious duel at the end, either with Harry
and Dumbledummy OR better yet Severus and Dumbledumbass.
Is it possible Dash can step in and speak to Dumbledork thru Harry?
For a second I thought we were going to have a serious duel at the end, either with Harry
and Dumbledummy OR better yet Severus and Dumbledumbass.
Is it possible Dash can step in and speak to Dumbledork thru Harry?
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December 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #61...
For a second I thought we were going to have a serious duel at the end, either with Harry
and Dumbledummy OR better yet Severus and Dumbledumbass.
Is it possible Dash can step in and speak to Dumbledork thru Harry?
For a second I thought we were going to have a serious duel at the end, either with Harry
and Dumbledummy OR better yet Severus and Dumbledumbass.
Is it possible Dash can step in and speak to Dumbledork thru Harry?
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December 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #60...
Quidditch scene: Severus was already acting like a Parent, whether he realized it or not. On the story
Pomegranate Seeds, the idea of Harry & Draco learning to become Hit wizards is appealing and something
you haven't done yet. It would be interesting to see a twist tho', of how the both of them have to overcome
reservations of taking life, to get the job done, because what they thought and the reality is different.
Quidditch scene: Severus was already acting like a Parent, whether he realized it or not. On the story
Pomegranate Seeds, the idea of Harry & Draco learning to become Hit wizards is appealing and something
you haven't done yet. It would be interesting to see a twist tho', of how the both of them have to overcome
reservations of taking life, to get the job done, because what they thought and the reality is different.
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December 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I meant in my last review that Harry probably would have killed himself. However, as much as I've yelled at Harry while reading this to stop being such a gullible dunderhead, I really like how you've written that Harry is slowly breaking away from the role that Dumbledipshit had written out for Harry to play, and to me that starting with placing the boy with his muggle relatives. And all the better to manipulate Harry even more than using his immature godfather against him. Too bad he didn't see Harry bonding with a basilisk whom would protect Harry when he had none, open up the boy's mind, becoming friends with Draco, and finally Snape coming to care for Harry so much he wants him as a son. Also, random question, but has something been done about Blaise trying to kill Dash? Are you coming back to that? I recall someone sending him some note about dealing with Dash. Or maybe I just need to go back and reread from chapter one. Oh, like I need an excuse with your stories.