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Please correct your disclaimer.

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Would this happen to be the 'Lady Jane' of 1) You Won't Know, 2) Bittersweet, 3) Ruined, and 4) Unwanted?

I always LOVE Veela fiction. Ones that are Dramoine are even better. You've grabbed MY attention. I hope to see more, and more, and more.

More, Please!!!

I like dark stories,but there has to be a redemption for the villain at some point. I think a well written dark story offers a sliver of light in the dark or else the story grow repetitive and dull.

I do hope Hermione isn't weak through the entire story.

I'm curios about you take on male veelas. They are very possessive creatures, yet Draco wasn't the slightest bit jealous of Hermione in the room w/ two men. Why did the smell fade when he was in the room?

This could be a good story if balanced and thought out.

Well, it appears that I will need to change my list of AFF authors that I follow, from Lady Jane to the new name. I always kept your titles listed, hoping for updates. I also lost my info, I was formerly MarksPet.

OK, I really, really, really, enjoyed the updated chapters. Such a dark and twisted Draco. AND a VEELA makes it even better *warm feeling all over*.

More, Please!!!

Interesting!

Good start. There were a couple of grammar issues, but overall it wasn't too bad.

Poor Hermione. I'd like to know how they got into their current situation.


I hope that you update frequently if your chapters are going to be this short.