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Yes, Ginny /Lucius would be an ok thing. She seems to be all right with him up to acertain point... It looks like she humors him. Oh and here must be hear I believe in the last chapter.

Please continue

Looks like she's developing Stockholm syndrome

love it!!! keep the crazy draco coming *pun intended*

Very curious where this is leading and hoping Hermione is not merely a thing. That would be upsetting....

I really don't want to see Draco die!

LadyJane, please continue your other fics! loved it so and been waiting for more.
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This one's excellent too!

I was about confused by that last chapter. I don't understand what the contract is. Why do the Malfoy men become veelas and why are they seemingly attracted to muggleborns? Also, Narcissa is a veela, so she must have been born one, which means Draco would actually be part veela because of his mother. I think I got turned around somewhere...

The two chapters before the last were also confusing because I don't know when Draco got to Hermione. I guess you're building a mystery, which is fine. I just hope you are able to untangle it all, so that the story is smooth.

The Malfoys all need to shut up with their pureblood nonsense. If they can turn into veelas then they're not quite 'purebloods' because purebloods pride themselves on being completely human. Muggles and muggleborns are more human than them. Bunch of hypocrites.

Thank you for the prompt updates.

Wait...I'm confused. Did he rape her or was he stopped by Lucius?

While this story is intriguing, it's also confusing me to no end! I realize writers are allowed to take liberties, otherwise there would never be a Dramione story; however, I have always seen veela portrayed as loving...always pleasing their mate, living for their mates happiness. It's inherently veela to think only of your mates happiness. Even if it's to the detriment of your own. Draco isn't anything close to resembling veela in this story...are you working under the assumption that there are dark veela as opposed to good veela?? It's not a criticism, I'm just having a hard time wrapping my head around his cruelty if he's actually a veela...is it because they were made veela and not born veela? But his mother was born so he'd be at least part natural veela going by your family history... Please clarify for me so I can stop scratching my head in confusion! Other than my own issue, the story is well written and very intriguing!