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October 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
ooh, what did the Veela mean by seeing her again. I think you've done a good job of separating Draco from the Veela. I can almost feel pity for him, especially the idea of being lied to by your parents. There spell is the reason all of this is happening. If they weren't so obsessed with blood purity, they would have let nature take its course.
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October 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione. She can never escape Draco now...unless she kills him.
Draco seemed really crazy in this chapter. He's seemed crazy before, but his calmness was just plain creepy.
Draco seemed really crazy in this chapter. He's seemed crazy before, but his calmness was just plain creepy.
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October 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What is Mr. Malfoy up to? I know he's not letting Hermione go out of the kindness of his heart. I don't think he's capable of having one.
I oddly like him sending her to her room. Treating her like a recalcitrant child is another way of getting under her skin. Although it doesn't seem dark, because of the lack bruises on her person, mental abuse is often worse than physical abuse, especially to someone who prides herself on being a free thinker.
I oddly like him sending her to her room. Treating her like a recalcitrant child is another way of getting under her skin. Although it doesn't seem dark, because of the lack bruises on her person, mental abuse is often worse than physical abuse, especially to someone who prides herself on being a free thinker.
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October 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I have to disagree with you on Dramione.
Draco, in canon, isn't actually evil. If he were evil, he would have had no problem killing Albus. Draco is more of an arrogant bully, who cowers in the face of adversity. Draco becomes a deatheater to save his mother. People seem to forget that Narcissa and Lucius (as much as he's capable) loved their son. Draco was spoiled and indoctrinated into racist beliefs. The Draco Malfoy in the novels is someone who had a lot of growing up to do..
Draco and Hermione are not total opposite (and we know what they say about opposites). They are both intelligent, manipulative, and family oriented. Hermione's a do gooder, and Draco will do what it takes to get what he wants. They balance each other out.
Also, some of the best love stories involve two people who dislike each other in the beginning only to later fall in love, which is the appeal of Dramione. As I've mentioned before, I love Tomione. You want to talk about a perfect pair that could never be, and yet a good writer makes it work. Creating a convincing pair out of two unlikely people is what separates the good writers from the mediocre ones.
Now, as for me, I love possessive, dominant Draco. I like a Draco who will hurt others to get what he wants, but won't hurt the woman he loves...too much. I also like a Draco who will destroy anyone keeping him from getting Hermione. It's hard to find a good dominant Draco with a strong, but submissive, Hermione.
Draco, in canon, isn't actually evil. If he were evil, he would have had no problem killing Albus. Draco is more of an arrogant bully, who cowers in the face of adversity. Draco becomes a deatheater to save his mother. People seem to forget that Narcissa and Lucius (as much as he's capable) loved their son. Draco was spoiled and indoctrinated into racist beliefs. The Draco Malfoy in the novels is someone who had a lot of growing up to do..
Draco and Hermione are not total opposite (and we know what they say about opposites). They are both intelligent, manipulative, and family oriented. Hermione's a do gooder, and Draco will do what it takes to get what he wants. They balance each other out.
Also, some of the best love stories involve two people who dislike each other in the beginning only to later fall in love, which is the appeal of Dramione. As I've mentioned before, I love Tomione. You want to talk about a perfect pair that could never be, and yet a good writer makes it work. Creating a convincing pair out of two unlikely people is what separates the good writers from the mediocre ones.
Now, as for me, I love possessive, dominant Draco. I like a Draco who will hurt others to get what he wants, but won't hurt the woman he loves...too much. I also like a Draco who will destroy anyone keeping him from getting Hermione. It's hard to find a good dominant Draco with a strong, but submissive, Hermione.
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October 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like darker stories as well and I'm really enjoying this one :). Though i do think the whole Ginny/Lucius part of the story should be it's own thing.
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October 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So glad he accepted his fate but I wonder about Hermione...
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October 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I bet the baby is gonna be Scorpious! And please do continue your previous works I love them so much since there isn't much dark!Dramione out there
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October 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hello. I have been following your story. I think you should keep writing. Between 30 and 31, it seems there was a considerable time skip. It would be great if you discussed some of the events then. I like the idea of Lucius and Ginny but I think it would be better to stay with the main pairing and then deviate after. There are still loose ends like the authorities and Mr. Weasley. Please keep writing. Don't stop.
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October 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
More! I miss these kind of dark ff's, not a lot of Gryffindors nowadays,just too
Afraid to write.
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Afraid to write.
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October 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Noooo I know it's your story and you can write what you want but please don't make part2 (or any part...) about Lucius/Ginny i like Lucius but Ginny bores me so. *Sigh* Honestly i care more about Arthur Weasley's breakfast than the romance between the two. Anyway I can't wait to read more thanks for the quick updates! :)