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October 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It's interesting to watch Draco fight with the Veela. I like the twist of him doing bad things to her because he can fill it when she's miserable and hates it.
I feel really bad for Hermione. She doesn't deserve this kind of treatment. I hope she finds some release, however it may come...
I feel really bad for Hermione. She doesn't deserve this kind of treatment. I hope she finds some release, however it may come...
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October 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like this dark fix. It is quite disturbing. I'm curious about how he will mindfuck Hermione when she actually is 'allowed' to leave. My story looks lik a light drabble compared to this....
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October 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is getting very interesting!
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October 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like how you update frequently throughout a day since your chapters are not so long. I got confused with the Ginny chapter and how she owled Hermione for help. Shouldn't she have been able to do that long ago or is she able to now because Lucius has gotten less intense with their sons being born?
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October 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Talk about vicious sex....l.hope the baby is okay...
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October 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Don't. Kill anyone yet at least
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October 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome! what'll happen now? if Lucius dies then ginny would too, and if draco dies then there's no more dramione :0
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October 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Finally, a normal conversation between them. It was good to get some insight into Hermione.
Draco's acceptance of the situation was interesting. He seemed to nonchalant about the whole thing.
Draco's acceptance of the situation was interesting. He seemed to nonchalant about the whole thing.
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October 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The drama keeps getting more intense. I feel it was a bit rushed to bring in Narcissa to confront Lucy Goosie, but I realize that only she is on pair with Lucius in terms on strength as Draco is a young veela still. It seems like a psychological/horror/thriller where Narcissa is the only sane person as the girls are too damaged.
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October 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow for a moment there I thought Draco was gonna die. So glad that his mom came to the rescue though I do feel a bit sad for Ginny.