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by valkyrie136

person Anonymous
schedule June 13, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This was good in a twisted way. I would continue to read other stories from you

person Lex
schedule June 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This was fantastic, most definitely an all time favorite
schedule August 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me there will be more about the twins and women Lucius is hiding. Is she muggle? I want to know more about this chapter.
person sammythe2nd
schedule July 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This was pretty good and I found it interesting spin on veela Draco.
I think it would be awesome if you wrote another fic about the background of Lucius and Ginny :D
schedule April 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this fic. I started reading and couldn't stop. It was very interesting. Thanks for sharing.
person Luvtracker
schedule April 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You clearly need more lessons in grammar, spelling and thought/story construction. Your plot though interesting was unorganized. It's sad how a plot with so much potential can be murdered mercilessly by its very own author.
person A_Diva
schedule October 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the glimmer of hope.
person Izzy
schedule October 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading the whole story. I absolutely loved it. Dark Draco fics are very interesting. Hopefully you decide to write Draco and Hermione in a Hogwarts setting.
person A_Diva
schedule October 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I did not see Narcissa getting the twins. I'm oddly intrigued by that turn of events. I almost want to see a story with Narcissa raising them. If you were a different kind of writer, I would request a short story of Narcissa finally finding a bit of happiness. Who knows, maybe she could even find her mate?

Lucius is scum. Poor Ginny. She would have been better off dead. I want him to die more than I want Draco. I honestly couldn't see Ginny living long. Well, maybe I could. I think she would spend her time planning Lucius's death and a way to get her children back, although she can't live if he dies. Hmm, maybe there's a way to incapacitate Lucius where he can live, but she can be free. Oh yeah, Azkaban! Or one of those spell that put people to sleep for years. Ginny can live her life and die of old age taking Lucy with her.

person A_Diva
schedule October 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your story with us. It wasn't my usual cup of tea, although I enjoyed it.

Have you read Eden by Obsessmuch on FF.net? That's supposedly a dark Lumione story. It's very long. I haven't read it because it just sounds to dang depressing.

If this was the last chapter, you should change the status.