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person truthseer
schedule September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It was very good. But Star you posted this on facebook not too long ago so i bet most of us already read the majority of it. I liked it then and i like it now
person djaddict
schedule September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What an intriguing and well-written (of course) beginning.

Although I am a bit apprehensive about the pairing, I eagerly await a new chapter!
schedule September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't help but laugh to myself when I realized I was once again reading another starlight_massacre story! XD
This story has already enraptured me and I will sit here patiently waiting for the next chapter. Or for rise of the drackens to update, as I read that too.
<3
schedule September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow... That's quite an impressive beginning! I'm one of the few people who don't read your Dracken story (not my kind of pairing though I do love your style!) but this sounds more like my kind of thing :) Fabulous first chapter and I wait impatiently for more!
person orkchild
schedule September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed the story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I have never been disappointed in any of your stor1es so please keep writing.
person Kat
schedule September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!!! Such a different outlook. I like why you made the Weasleys and Malfoys feuding. Kinda like the Hatfields and the McCoys!!!
person Anon
schedule September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like the start. There are not enough well written RLestrange/HP fics. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Theriel
schedule September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Amazing, Star. What can I say?, you are one of the best writers, If I like the preview, now I simply fell In love with it. Yes you
person delia cerrano
schedule September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is the start of what looks to be a terrific story just the kind I like best! I'll have to go back to see what the pairing will be. My favorite is Severus/Harry with Draco/Harry a close second. I've read a couple others that proved to be good though (Lucius was one of them).
person Anon
schedule September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I've loved all your stories so far and this is no different.
I am really looking forward to how this one is going to play out.