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Fabulous beginning to your story! Thank you for having Harry slowly be learning that all things aren't black and white, and that all Slytherins aren't evil. I am so glad that he has Lucius in his corner, hopefully that will help him with Dumbledore's manipulations. At least Dumbledore will no longer be able to use Harry's Wizengamot seats. Very interesting story! I can't wait to find out what you have planned for Harry next!

Interesting to see you get into the "Lordship" trope :P it must be fun for you to have the change. But I wonder, how much would they actually let a teenager make important decisions? This is government, after all. One of our politicans is getting a lashing right now for being too young and incompetent and I'm pretty sure he's at least 30. So will it be hard for Harry to gain respect?

Yay! I'm so happy to see another story from you. You're one of my absolute favorite authors here, especially when it comes to Harry Potter fanfiction. Looking forward to reading more and seeing how things develop and what explanation there is for Lucius' reaction to Draco's behavior and the discrepancy Harry's seeing between this Lucius Malfoy and the one he saw in the Department of Mysteries. You're stories always have these little twists and turns in the plot line that I can't predict, and I love it when I can't predict the plot of the story I'm reading. Thanks for putting so much time and effort into your writing. I am totally addicted ^_^

If I could hug you I would. I love your stories and I'm engrossed from the word go.
Great work and looking forward to the next instalment.

hey
love this so far
great first start I was absolutely hooked when I started to read it I couldn't stop until I finished
cant wait for the next chapter please keep updating
cullengal101

This is an awesome start for a story, and I look forward eagerly to the next chapter. I really like that while you are clearly making Lucius one of the good guys in this, you have kept the essence of the original character, that self assured arrogance that he knows who and what he is.

I love your new story as I have all of your story's I have read so far you have a way of righting that just draws you in so once again I LOVE it

I love this story, and cannot wait to see what way it goes keep up the good work.

Interesting.
I loved the preview that you had posted on Facebook, and I'm so glad that you decided to make a story out of it! I really loved how you added more details to the preview and I am really looking forward to Lucius drilling Draco on how he behaved in Hogwarts; I hope you add that scene! :D

I thought there was a scene where Harry told them about the extra keys to his trust funds that Dumbledore and Molly had, but maybe that will be discussed later on in the story! I can't remember on whether you'd be making Hermione and Ron the bad guys, but I hope you do! :D

Really looking forward to the next chapter, thank you for doing this! :D

As always amazing! This will help me surviving my time waiting for my flight at London Gatwick. My saviour <3 Thanks Star!