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This is the fourth or fifth story of yours I'm reading and it's shaping up to be another good one. One of the things I've noticed in your stories is that you used a good deal of commas where periods or semi colons would better serve. I mention it only because it tends to give the story a run-on, stream of consciousness feel. Also, you don't need to keep spelling out details such as "He didn

I quite enjoyed this chapter, although I do wonder what the betrothal to Rabastan will do to his relationship with Neville. I don't see him taking that well.

okay, I was very skeptical of this pairing. You proved me wrong. Loved the chapter and the honest reactions from Harry and the brothers. Their father truly did come off creepy and if I was Harry I wouldn't have been able to control the reaction to a slimy hand kiss. Looking forward to the continuation of this one.

Incredible new chapter! I am so glad that Harry is finally learning, and becoming better, with his interactions with the Malfoy family. It's funny how they don't even realize how they rescued him from the Dursleys. Thank you also for having Harry be receptive to the younger LeStrange brother. It would be so nice if he was able to help him get over his time in Azkaban. I just wonder how Voldemort will feel about the report he receives from the LeStranges? I hope he realizes that Harry no longer wants to be his enemy! I also hope that Harry won't have to go back to Griffindor. His friends will never accept the new Harry, and still expect him to be Dumbledore's man. Thank you for your wonderful update! Can't wait for more!

Awesome!!! So many stories have the ones that were in prison for a long time except Bellatrix as sane as when they went in. I like that they are a little less sane. Rab and Harry are cute!!!!! More soon please!!! 😻😻😻😻

Harry is certainly different but has hints of his "usual" personality poking through. I was looking for Harry/Draco but Rabastan sounds like he could be a fun match as he gets healthier. Love to read what Ginny, Ron, Hermione, the parent Weasleys etc think. Also Dumbledore and Severus (my absolute favorite mate for Harry).

*Pets Rabastan*

I hate the whole "proper pureblood behavior" thing (although I get it as part of the story) but it's funny when Narcissa corrects Harry, even while comforting him.

Pretty please, let Harry kill Bellatrix!

This is a compelling read. I look forward to more of this

Love this story like your other harry potter stories! I'm a big fan!! I hope you're also still writing your other shoot off from Rise of the Drakens (seriously one of the best fanfictions ever!) Hope you're having a good vacation!

Amazing start!!! I can't wait to read more, this is such an interesting idea I can't wait to see where it goes