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October 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant as always, my dear. I love the characterization of the Lestranges and how Harry gets to see just how close Pureblood families are considered. Realistic and wonderful.
I cannot wait to see how those two little knuckleheads start getting along later in the story, it will be so much fun!
I cannot wait to see how those two little knuckleheads start getting along later in the story, it will be so much fun!
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October 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories :) Starting to read it, I thought - this relationship does not work out. I was wrong, so far it is brilliant. Waiting for more;)
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October 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter! And a great one at that, thanks Star.
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October 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh my I truly adore your fanfiction. They're always so wonderfully written. I especially love Rise of the Drackens along with Draken memoirs and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter for the latter story. Along with this one as well, it's just so wonderful, I never would have thought someone would pair Harry and Rabastan but they look so cute! Oh I really can't wait! Thank you for taking such time and care to write such wonderful stories!
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October 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
hey
loved the chapter please keep updating
I am glad that they are at least receptive to each other already
I must admit curiosity concerning Bellatrix and rodolphus and whether harry will do anything as Bellatrix is disrespecting not only the contract, but her husband and her head of house by not producing children for the lestrange line.
so I was wondering whether harry will null the contract, or give Bellatrix a year to turn her act around and get along with her husband enough to actually produce an heir or there will be consequences. also stop being a harlot and going after voldemort in affections but not showing any to her husband.
cullengal101
loved the chapter please keep updating
I am glad that they are at least receptive to each other already
I must admit curiosity concerning Bellatrix and rodolphus and whether harry will do anything as Bellatrix is disrespecting not only the contract, but her husband and her head of house by not producing children for the lestrange line.
so I was wondering whether harry will null the contract, or give Bellatrix a year to turn her act around and get along with her husband enough to actually produce an heir or there will be consequences. also stop being a harlot and going after voldemort in affections but not showing any to her husband.
cullengal101
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October 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading this fic so far. I love the writing style. It is clear, grammatically correct, and vivid with emotion. I appreciate the depiction of Harry and the Malfoys'. The familial interactions are sweet but not over the top. The interaction with Rabastian was heartwarming and I look forward to reading more about them. I really appreciate how cannon is represented in that you don't stray too far off.
I do however have a bone to pick. Dumbledore was a manipulative bastard. In the cannon, he allows and even encourages Harry to get into situations where he could die. That being said, I am a little hesitant to agree with your representation of Dumbledore. I feel, in this case, he has painted him as bumbling, scheming, and power-hungry. I have no problem with the latter two, but I take issue with former. Dumbledore, in my mind at least, is intelligent. I am a little concerned he might be set up as a one-dimensional stooge.
As for future posts, I have a few hopes and queries. I am curious about how you will deal with the Voldemort issue. I wonder if one of the Weasley family turn out to be genuine friends to Harry. For my vote, I hope the twins and Ginny are on Harry's side and that Hermione will do enough research to realize that Harry was being neglected and taken advantage of.
My next step is to read more from StarLight_Massacre.
I do however have a bone to pick. Dumbledore was a manipulative bastard. In the cannon, he allows and even encourages Harry to get into situations where he could die. That being said, I am a little hesitant to agree with your representation of Dumbledore. I feel, in this case, he has painted him as bumbling, scheming, and power-hungry. I have no problem with the latter two, but I take issue with former. Dumbledore, in my mind at least, is intelligent. I am a little concerned he might be set up as a one-dimensional stooge.
As for future posts, I have a few hopes and queries. I am curious about how you will deal with the Voldemort issue. I wonder if one of the Weasley family turn out to be genuine friends to Harry. For my vote, I hope the twins and Ginny are on Harry's side and that Hermione will do enough research to realize that Harry was being neglected and taken advantage of.
My next step is to read more from StarLight_Massacre.
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October 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter!
I love how things went, and the thing I love most about your stories is that each chapter is deliciously long. When Lucius had told Harry that he would have to be betrothed to keep him safe, I thought you were going to make Harry choose who he wanted to be betrothed to, and I was crossing my fingers that he would choose Luna because they were friends and she wouldn't hold it against Harry when he falls in love with Rabastan; imagine Luna and her quirky personality around the Malfoys, I couldn't stop grinning! But I love how you took the betrothal and I love how you made Rabastan!
The interactions Rabastan and Harry had were amazing, and I love the little moment they had at the end. I'm really looking forward to more moments between them and I'm absolutely looking forward to when Harry goes back to Hogwarts; from the letters he's been getting from Hermione and Ron it ought to be an interesting school year! I hope Harry uses his silver tongue to put those who are trying to control him in their places! Really looking forward to the next chapter! :D
I love how things went, and the thing I love most about your stories is that each chapter is deliciously long. When Lucius had told Harry that he would have to be betrothed to keep him safe, I thought you were going to make Harry choose who he wanted to be betrothed to, and I was crossing my fingers that he would choose Luna because they were friends and she wouldn't hold it against Harry when he falls in love with Rabastan; imagine Luna and her quirky personality around the Malfoys, I couldn't stop grinning! But I love how you took the betrothal and I love how you made Rabastan!
The interactions Rabastan and Harry had were amazing, and I love the little moment they had at the end. I'm really looking forward to more moments between them and I'm absolutely looking forward to when Harry goes back to Hogwarts; from the letters he's been getting from Hermione and Ron it ought to be an interesting school year! I hope Harry uses his silver tongue to put those who are trying to control him in their places! Really looking forward to the next chapter! :D
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October 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I've read your Dracken stories already and you've snared me again. And I don't even really like the Lestranges in a romantic light, so that's saying something. Is there any way you can send update alerts to us? I'd loved to know when this gets updated again so I'm not going crazy.
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October 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome amazing chapter but I can't see Harry being so prejudice that is the one thing that through me mushroom and him being happy with bella and PeterI would be the one's he wanted killed off as well as the father in law
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October 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am sooo in love with this fic! the way you write harry and rabastan! I so hope to see harry helping rabastan back to health, but I completely trust you, and I look forward to see were you'll take this fanfic!
hugs!
// Excited Fan!
hugs!
// Excited Fan!