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person Boudreaux
schedule October 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The more I read of this story the more fascinated I become by and with it. You are going places with the characters that I have never seen before and would never have thought of even. Yet at the same time, they aren't so much changed as they are deepened, made more real. In the beginning of the story, I would have said that it was just not possible for Lucius to be anything but evil, but the way in which you have written all of the main characters so far has been a very believable and realistic growth in both knowledge and understanding of things they simply hadn't considered rationally previously. It makes the characters more than characters, they become people, they become real to the reader. I find myself eagerly waiting for future developments.
person claddagh
schedule October 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love this!!! Looking forward to your next update......
person Stena
schedule October 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love you this new chapter and cant wait for the next one
person ChaosLady
schedule October 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was wonderful, I can't wait till the next update! There is just one thing: Snowy Owls are one of the largest owls there is, in fact they are the largest owls in North America- their wingspan is about ten feet across. Draco's Eagle Owl is originally a native of Africa and is about the same size, maybe a little larger. So, Harry's owl would have about the same speed and endurance as Draco's and neither owl is "little".
schedule October 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I absoloutely love this story! It's so unlike anything I've read before I just can't wait for more. I'm so curious to see how it will progress and I can't wait for Voldemort to come along. I think you'll do him justice, as you said he's an intelligent man, I always felt that splitting his soul messed him up a little but he was still intelligent and calculating. I really can't wait till the next update :)
person Samantha
schedule October 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love this and all your stories
person staar
schedule October 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update !!!!!!!!!! man it's really good so don't stop writing !!!! so happy that Harry said all that to his friends , and now Luc will find out all that was done to him....need to have the headmasters hand on a plater here !!!!!!! hope to god that you don't make Harry's other half mean and nuts, nuts ok mean no !!!! see you soon please !!!!! let me tell you first time to read this pair up so far I like
person elektraeriseros
schedule October 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderful and so well written!!! I can't wait for the upcoming chapters! I'll definitely be on the lookout for this one!
person Meiya
schedule October 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter! Glad they know about his past now, this will help him lots in the long run. Loving how his relationship is going too. :D cant wait for chapter 4!
person Outlawgal
schedule October 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am in LOVE with this story. Heck with all of you stories. I always get excited to see an update from you.
I like that Harry and Rabastan are getting along so well. I also like how much stronger Harry has become. I just hope the Dumbledore doesn't do something stupid and ruins it all. All the hard work that everyone has put into making Harry better. I like that you are making Voldemort more like the books then movies. Are you going to have Harry join the dark or stay neutral? Will Voldemort demand Harry's presence so he can kill him and will Rabastan stand up and save Harry from the love that is growing between them.
Oh so many questions and thoughts running through my head. Can't wait for more :)