AFF Fiction Portal
person staar
schedule February 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well Harry sure has his work out for him....trying to kill his Reb's father and all the Redheads that are now the enemy !!! Thank for the update loved it !!!!!!!!!!!! Be good !!!
person autumngold
schedule February 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Your new chapter is incredible! I feel so sorry for Harry, being caught between two selfish and evil madmen. While I understand that Dumbledore just sees Harry as a horcrux who needs to die for the greater good, how does that make his actions towards him right? I love the fact that Harry doesn't want to fight, he is so kind and loving to his betrothed. I just wish there was some way that Rabastian would choose him over Voldemort. As for Bill, his thoughts are horrible. I really hope that he gets in deep trouble for telling Dumbledore what is going on in the Wizengamot. Fabulous update! Thank you for your wonderful new chapter! Can't wait for more!
person ChaosLady
schedule February 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yes, a lovely, loonng, chapter.
person Kari Jordan
schedule January 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love your work and this story is amazing I can not wait till the next chapter comes out
person tkykitty
schedule January 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this new fic of yours! I was reading Drackens and saw your after post about your new story. I was super excited to see what it entailed. At first I was completely thrown by the pairing Rab/Harry but I like it! More than like it I love it! And that's because you create such a round full world where these characters live. I think the only character I hate is Rabastan's fathere lol. But you make it so easy to hate him.
I've read all six chapters and am thirsty for more. I would review each chapter but there is sooooo much that I don't even think I could process it all in a review lol. Needless to say I'm excited to see: 1)How bill Weseley will handle his lordship and if he actually expands his mind instead of following Albus, 2)how harry plans to handle Rabastan's father 3) their winter break together 4) if any of harry's old friends actually grow brains 5) how voldie plays in your new universe and 6)every other new surprise you have coming for your readers.
Thanks for being a great writer and I look forward to more of this universe you've created.
schedule January 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So love this story keep'em coming can't wait for the update.
person staar
schedule January 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
yes, I do believe Harry is thinking that Rab's dad would kill or harm his kids...so he needs to go !!!!!!!!!! thanks for the update and Happy New Year also !!!!!!!!!!! ye update the Drakens its been too long !!!!!
schedule January 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter!
I love how Harry is handling himself and how things are going! I thought the scene where Harry and Rabastan was caught kissing was going to be in this chapter, but I guess I misread the information you had put with that little snippet.

And speaking of Rabastan, loved the beginning where he had another scene where we saw how he was going and how he felt about Harry! Loved that he was having fantasies of Harry! :D

I wonder if that muggleborn he got pregnant will be entering the story again as someone trying to hurt Harry and Rabastan. And I wonder how Harry will kill Rabastan's father. Really looking forward to the next chapter! Hoped you had a good New Years! :D
person autumngold
schedule January 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your incredible new chapter! I really hope that Harry is careful with his plans against Rabastian's father. It could ruin all of his future plans if he gets convicted of the crime. I do think that Harry has a point, however, that his children would never be safe with that evil man around. I am so glad that he wants to keep them safe. The Quidditch match was excellent! I love the fact that the team won without either Weasley. I wonder if they, and Hermione, are still in trouble for stealing Harry's broom? Wonderful story! Hope that you have an outstanding new year!
person Anon
schedule December 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
noooo!! i love your stories!! i wanted to see what happened next! i've read all of you stories!! they're written so well and i can't wait to read more!