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Okay, so this is going so well! I wanted to bang my head on my desk when I read how silly Rabastan was behaving, trying to push Harry off to other men. Where'd his Slytherin selfish behavior go then? Mercifully it made a come back between the Rowle incident. Oh, if Harry want's that Rhad...whatever his name is, gone, perhaps Voldie can do it. After all, if the man is detrimental to one of his most loyal follower's health improving, Xerxes has no qualm, it can be done 'silently', and it would put him in his *enemy's* favor, why not? As much as Harry would love to do it, surely he knows somewhere in his mind if he is caught, all he's fought for with Rabastan will be undone.
Can't wait for more!

Leania

Harry was so good in getting Ras all ton oh there.... and hope to see in the need future about getting Pancy hurt of something for being all over Ras....Thanks !!!!!

I hope that you know how much I love your incredible story! I did get scared, however, that Harry plan wouldn't work. Thank you for not leaving me wondering until Narcissa and Lucius' New Years party on whether Harry and Rabastan will stay together. I do wonder, however, if Harry and Rabastan will still get engaged? Absolutely wonderful update! Can't wait to find out what you have planned for Harry next!

Wonderful update!

I just wish you would let Harry kill Rhadamanthus! Lol Really,really painfully.

You made Marcus so attractive in this chapter that it's hard to continue to support the Rabastan/Harry pairing. It almost seems like it's less love and more a weird manifestation of Harry's "saving people" thing. I'm also rather appalled that Lucius isn't more supportive of removing Radamanthus from the picture.

I get that the Order only knows what they are being told, but how can they believe that Harry had any choice? I'm looking forward ţo Bill seeing eventually that Harry is no puppet. That's what I'm hoping for at least. What also bales me is why the horcrux keep them from at least going to battle. If they could disemboy and weaten him it would buy time and delay alliances and power building.

I'm curious as to whether Harry should be resorted....but he loves his team and being in Griffindor has to be some protection from slurs.

I'm hoping this evolves towads Harry gaining influence and power to make changes without Voldie's indiscriminate viokence. Not that I want to see him a dark lord but he can be ruthless and smart without being evil.

I find myself lI king Rabastan and hope he doesn't turn back to a torturing, selfishe git. It would also be interesting to see if Severus is more loyal to Dd or Voldie.....or if he would be open to a third option. He would be a great resource for getting rid of a pesky future father in law without suspicion. I'd bet Xerxes or Rodolfo would do anything to protect Rabastan but Harry won't know and can't trust in that at this point.

I immediately got hook on your story, its good and original y just hope that you don't leave it unfinished like so many stories out there. Plz update soon ;-)

Loved the chapter!
I love how Harry and Rabastan were trying to get around the traditions of the betrothal period, and I love that Harry did all his homework in about two days to the point of exhaustion all so he could spend more time with Rabastan! After all that and what Harry said at dinner, I don't know what Rhadamanthus could have possibly said to turn Rabastan against Harry!

Looking forward to finding out in the next chapter! :D

Nice twist there at the end because I'm pretty sure the new arrival is Charlie - it would make sense. Maybe he could even become a love interest for Rodolphus in time - after Bella is dealt with, of course.