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I like the fact that Severus is willing to truly help Langston, and in a way I am hoping Sirius meets Ted, please update chapter 26 ^_^

I'm really liking where this is all going. The mystery behind Langston mum has me soo curious. What I love about fan fiction the most is that I get to see everything unfold as you write each chapter. I look forward to refreshing the 'latest stories' page every day to see if you've updated or not.

Although I do want Remus and Sirius to do something to help Langston, I want Severus to be the one to stay with him, and be his new daddy ^_^ I think they would be great for each other as father and son.
Please update chapter 25 soon.

Now that was a tense chapter to read. I'm glad to see Sev's overprotectiveness will Langston. Can't wait to see everything from Andrew's point of view.

Ohmygosh! Yay! I was hoping Sev would bring Langston. I will admit that I rather loudly and happily exclaimed "YES!" Out in public on my train ride home. Sev for sure had the best present of all. I felt the build up to the scene to when Sev showed up and got absolutely excited. I definitely look forward to how Sev brought him and how Andrew will introduce him to all his friends. I'm still grinning as I write this. It was definitely a cheerful chapter from beginning to end :)

Sev so nice to bring Lan's to Andrews party...thanks for the update !!!!!

I can understand Sev's disdain to being served by elves. I've always seen him as a man who enjoyed simple things and to do it himself. I look forward to what you have in store for the next chapter.

Tweeters is definitely Andrew's familiar. It's good that he had her to keep him company and to cheer him up when he was with Ted.
I couldn't help but feel a small pang in my chest over Andrew wanting Langston with him. I couldn't help but just think "we all want him with you too". Maybe sev can surprise him at his birthday? I'll have to wait and see :)

I feel bad for Audrey, but I truly hope the test comes out negative, and if not, I'm hoping that they get to start treatment quickly so they're able to demolish it completely. Please update chapter 21 soon ^_^

I was so happy to see that I had 2 chapters to read tonight before I went to sleep.

Fingers crossed that Audrey wakes up soon and that Andrew doesn't test positive with the same illness.(I wonder how lily will get a strand of hair from Andrew for the potion)
I tend to imagine each scene play out in my head as I read along. Kind of like watching an episode play out but using my imagination. I had a good laugh over imagining Sev hiding in the bushes disillusioned and nearly getting hit by Ted (not laughing over Sev nearly getting hurt but imagining his reaction and stream of silent profanities coming out of his mouth as he silently curses Ted.) I'm happy to see the interaction between Sev and Langston.
Andrew's glee over seeing Sev again was adorable and inviting him to his birthday was even cuter! I loved it.

I think that it's sweet that Lily thought to add muggle games into play time with the boys. Keeping that connection with her background for Harry and for Andrew too.
I'm excited for chapter 21! Felt the suspense at the end with the potion.