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This was an interesting story, but with a very disappointing ending. I was hoping the spell could be reversed. Their is a big lack of a story line.

now once this literal statement idea is known there will be more sex in one year at the school then in the last hundred years put together. now since you did not put m/m or m/m/m as options in the warnings then i guess harry and the creevey brothers are out as a hookup. so i guess i have to go with my guy girl hookups. well harry would be the guy to hook up with these girls fleur, gabby, daphne, astoria, susan and hanna an if you want luna as well.

now with this whole gender bending thing this could totally screw up the school and of course you need to ask how far does this power go. the first thing you need to do is order that no one else notices that things are changing around them so that no one else can counter your orders with their own orders then have dumbledore get all the so-called dark families to hogwarts and have them turn everything they have over to harry as payment for old family debts including their magic. an if voldimort is still around you can have him wiped out with only a word or two. you could do the gender bending on the creevey brothers and turn them into harry's person sex slaves? heck you could turn every guy in the school into a girl who all want harry.

now the way i see it if the goddess wanted to make herself more powerful and do so more quickly she would put out a command that whenever anyone thought about sex or have sex they would make the goddess a billion times more powerful then she was before the thought or deed and that any member of the church who even mentioned the goddess to someone would change them into a follower of the church. an even if this power does not travel outside the school granger would be the most powerful being ever within days if not hours.

Oh dear, has Luna accidentally created Slaanesh inside of Hogwarts? Keep going, please. I want to see what happens next.

This is very interesting! I find I like the hedonism punctuated by moments of disbelief in reality. It's actually a really fun contrast. I'm interested to see where this goes!