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for Shame's Desire

by dweek

person lexiatel
schedule December 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this chapter was great, but a total tease, lol! Loved it, and I can't wait for more!

Thank you ;)
person sherlocked17
schedule December 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure I Will enjoy This story. Fiery little Ginny, I hope Lucius and maybe Draco have soms sinfullness planned with her....
person lexiatel
schedule December 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Omg, I was DYING for an update! LOL. Your story is my favorite, and when I see it on the first page, I can't do anything else until I read it :P

person sherlocked17
schedule November 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Delicious as it is but some things do not ad up as being medieval. (sorry, history is my thing)
But other than that it is tantalizing.
Maybe a bit more want on both sides. More heat preferably as in tension. Or is that reserved for later?
person lexiatel
schedule November 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter. So satisfying. Draco is just like Lucius, lol.

I hope the next chapter isn't so long. Nice to see you're doing Nano, me too, but I only have 16.6k words written so far.
person mukamuka
schedule October 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! that was something! I can't wait to see what else Lucius comes up with in terms of his wife :)
person lexiatel
schedule October 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The sixth Chapter was great! :) I am literally addicted to this story. I love Lucius' mind hehe, he's so evil too. Making her pay for her father's "sins"! I can't wait for more.
person Lady Miya
schedule October 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow things are really heating up between them! You definitely have them both very much in character. I hope though that Ginny will find the upper hand somewhere down the line but thus far, really great! Looking forward to see the next chapter. I'm sensing more smut coming up ;)
person delia cerrano
schedule September 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good for her!! The only way she is going to keep her self? personality? will be to be feisty...keep him on his toes...do the powerful, the unexpected or he will swallow her. Glad Bella was put in her place.
person lexiatel
schedule September 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what an excitingly hot chapter. This was just.... !!! wow... No words really :)