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for Harry\'s Shadow

by SpeedyTomato

person autumngold
schedule March 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I love the thought of Harry having a companion who helps him and keeps him safe. Hopefully, between the two of them, they won't be pulled into Dumbledore's plans and manipulations. Amazing new chapter! Thank you for having Sirius take such good care of Harry! Can't wait to see what you have planned for the two of them next!
person Tiffany Northam
schedule March 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Excellent impatiently awaiting a new chapter!
person Aina
schedule December 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I've been looking for quite a while for a story with the pair Sirius / Harry, at first only in German, but since you will find only one or two. But since I did not give up, I wanted just once in English ... and what a lucky I have found such a good story. And I really like it.
Hum ... in terms of spelling, I know I do not look as good in English as in German, but I was able to read it fluently.
I hope I can soon read a new chapter and look forward to it.
Best regards,
Aina

PS: I was too lazy to translate all this themselves, so you can put all the error on Google. x33
person rigger42
schedule December 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Its interesting how close and physically comfortable the two are with each other...well, Sirius seems physical to Harry at least...without it crossing into the sexual in their minds. I hope that it doesn't startle them at some point and make them feel repellent and guilty. Or, not for long at least, though Harry is way too young at this stage.

They do seem to be soulmates of a sort don't they? Sirius' absolute love and support and his increasing ability to impact the world around him are great, and I'm glad to see he is certain about eventually regaining his body. I'm curious, does Gringotts have him down as deceased?
person staar
schedule December 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
finally the rat is caught !!!!! thanks for the update !!!!!!
person Anon
schedule December 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You use the word "bits" with *far* too much frequency in your writing. Using the same word or phrase too repetitively can be really off-putting to a reader. This is meant to be constructive criticism and I hope it helps.
person autumngold
schedule December 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Outstanding new chapter! I love that Peter has been caught, hopefully this will make some, like Dumbledore, feel pretty guilty for what they did to Sirius. Thankfully, with Sirius by his side, Harry won't fall for any of Dumbledore's tests or manipulations. Excellent update! Can't wait to see what your wonderful mind will come up with next!
person BAFan
schedule October 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 9

Sirius may love Harry and want to help him and protect him, but he's still a prat in many ways. Please don't let him go overboard with the pranks.


~Debbie
person starr
schedule October 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update , so funny that Snape didn't get what he wanted ..to get Harry in trouble !!!!!!! good that....yea his aunt needs to be pulled in...Hermione the same as even know it all bnit !!!!!!
person autumngold
schedule October 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for letting Harry have Sirius to help him during his first year at Hogwarts! Hopefully, that will keep the jerks like Severus, Dumbledore, Ron and Hermione away. It is wonderful that with Sirius' help he is learning to be a strong wizard that thinks for himself. Fabulous new chapter! I love all of your stories, you are an amazing author! Can't wait for more!