As of this review I've just finished chapter 55, truly a good read I'm glad to have a hundred or so chapters left to be honest. But the crossovers I'll admit again have me smiling because while I enjoy the smutty nature of this story. The plot line of moments in love just seems to have captured me, however this little gem deserves it's own credit. You've been able to take an idea and warp it to your own and to that's truly something I'll admit I'm impressed by. Long story short, ive fallen in love with both stories and have thoroughly enjoyed what Ive read so far.
Ello, I will admit, after my previous comment on another story of yours I wanted to see if you had written anything else. I'm glad to have found another one of your stories to binge in. Anyways, love the idea you had for this story, the idea of Hermione having something like this happen. But one thing that I wouldon't like to ass, why make Ron such an ass lol. Don't get me wrong he is as dense as a solid oak, but it seems like he's for a lack of a better term, rather on your shit list. But enough of my ramblings, love the story so far and will openly admit I continue to chew through the rest of this story.
Ok now ik I'm gonna more then likely sound annoying, but lol I swear you used this exact line in moments in love "We were both very big on rebellion... but responsibility, not so much. You’ve managed to demonstrate a large degree of both in a single act - and you’re not even in third year yet. ”. I would be a liar to say I didn't laugh.
Stumbled across this while Googling the Heinlein reference to the sculpture "She who was once the beautiful hermione". The charactor's discussion of Heinlein and Stranger are good, and the sex bits were well-done. Overall, well-written IMHO. May have to come back and see more of what happened after Hogwart's.
This story is a wonderful remix, but throughout the whole story, Dumbledore has been calling Hermione: "Mrs. Potter", so why did he call her miss Granger on chapter 176?
this was a perfect way to end this storyline with the extra chapters . you are a great writer good luck on your next storylinr.
So, I think that I have posted a review about this before, and I may have, but I figured that I would do it again just to reiterate how fantastic of a story this is.
If you are ending it at 186 chapters, then well done, you have crafted a alternate version of the Harry Potter series that is genious in it's own right. However, if you continue it or choose to make a sequal, then do so knowing that at the very least, one person would read and enjoy it.
- Noah
P.S. To be clear, I did originally start reading this because of the content tags, but ended up reading it just to see what happened next.