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December 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
It' fast paced and exiting even if it did progress fast. Personally I'd lke a bit more lead up but this style works in it's own way as well. simply superb I'll keep reading. (I now realise that I'm VERY partial to cat-girls myself =, although I will admit 8 nipples were a bit odd to me as well.) This is original work and I've seen very little if anything like it before. If you could make more long these lines maybe in other AU storylines it would be facinating to read.
Many thanks, You're new convertee.
Many thanks, You're new convertee.
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September 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like this author's name,
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September 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Recent chapters have all been good except for one thing. I can't say I approve of making Luna and Pavarti catgirls too. It was a lot more special when Hermione was unique, next thing you know, every girl in Hogwarts does it. It was also very poorly attached to the end of the chapter in a single sentence which makes me think you thought of it at the last second. Personally I'd revise that.
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September 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Huh, now I'm kinda confused. The polyjuice incident was in second year, Sirus's escape in third. I know that it's not canon, the sex made it clear, but isn't a year to early for the quidditch world cup? And why is Harry going with Petunia and Dudley? I know that Umbridge took over the ministry and revocked Sirus's innocence, but now I'm lost. The flows of events just go to fast to make sense. ^^'' Otherwise it's a good chapter. Will Harry and Hermione find other playmates for their kinky games or is it a closed group?
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September 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, really nice story. It's got a nice mix of plot and smut. I saw a few stories where Hermione still have side effects of the cat/polyjuice incident but not even one got close to yours. Now he's married with Hermione and sometimes they play with Parvati and now Luna. It's nice to see some characters who aren't used that often at this stage of their education. :)
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August 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i have read all of this story and i love it! i would have posted a comment sooner but i wanted to read all of it .
this is a wonderful story and i cant wait to read more of this when you post!
i like were you have taken the character's and added your twist.
i never liked the weasel family that much other then the twins, bill, Charlie and the dad. so i enjoyed them being put on the sidelines.
so please update again soon i cant wait to read more of this delightful story
this is a wonderful story and i cant wait to read more of this when you post!
i like were you have taken the character's and added your twist.
i never liked the weasel family that much other then the twins, bill, Charlie and the dad. so i enjoyed them being put on the sidelines.
so please update again soon i cant wait to read more of this delightful story
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August 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So far this is an amazing story
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August 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
love it will Hermione have kittens
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August 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Just started reading this fic. I'm loving the Harry and Hermione. Adding Parvati and Luna was pretty hot. Will other girls join them for fun? Luna sometimes take things literally, I could she her giving Harry a collar to put on Hermione.
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August 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
hi
I really like where your are going with this story!!! it is really different!! i hope to see new chapters soon. keep up with it
thank you
clau
I really like where your are going with this story!!! it is really different!! i hope to see new chapters soon. keep up with it
thank you
clau