Wonderful story. Thank you so much for writing and sharing it.
Wow GB, just finished HFLP and I loved it. Thanks for the stories wonder if MIL will end similar to this one?
Love it, I look forward to the next chapter.
One spelling mistake, right near the end of the chapter: "Harry summoned his wand; it skittered across the stone floor and he cuaght* it deftly in his hand..." *caught
I have to admit I wasn't sure about this story at first. I don't usually go for Harry/multi stories, but only Harry/Hermione. That being said, I'm very glad I gave this story a chance.
It was very well written, with minor spelling and grammar errors (I think I found one of each), and very believable characterizations that fit with the first of the Harry Potter novels, before JK 'goes off the rails' as it were.
Now I'm going to go catch up with Moments, but I may have to start over at the beginning, to remind myself of the differences between that story and this. Well done, thank you for sharing your talent.
Wait...wait, what? BELLATRIX is working for the Toad? Wow, did not see that one coming. Nice twist!
Slight error in this chapter. You have Harry painting the protection Runes on Hermione, and yet it's Hermione chucking things at Harry to test to see if they'll work.
Please tell me that Percy gets his. I like him even less in this than I did in Moments.
Just as good as Moments in Love so far. I hope to see the same changes to the Great Hall. (Don't want to give any spoilers)
Well damn, (just finished chapter 188) as said before I came for smut and don't get me wrong your provided very well. But truly you've taken J.K's work and made it your own I love this story to be quite frank and if I had to pay to read it. I would have gladly, the time and effort you put into this story just truly shows, it's nice to see Ron somewhat matured, I will admit I had hoped for a different ending for everyone's favorite minister. Kudos as well for the styling of her as a Hitler like ruler, it just helped me hate her actions even more. Anyways again truly just an amazing readay and I've actually eneed up with 12 bookmarks, all for this story.