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August 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
LOVED THIS CHAPTER!! Trust Draco to only hear what he wants lol Narcissa, I can totally understand her, as a mother you just want your children happy. SO NEED NEXT CHAPTER!!!
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August 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I was def had tears in my eyes reading various bits of this story! Especially the end.
I feel like your older Malfoy's are very balanced, they're not entirely accepting of blood status but they're opening up. I also like their relationship as a family, it seems loving in their way but not overly warm and fuzzy.
Poor Draco! He does this to himself, though!
I feel like your older Malfoy's are very balanced, they're not entirely accepting of blood status but they're opening up. I also like their relationship as a family, it seems loving in their way but not overly warm and fuzzy.
Poor Draco! He does this to himself, though!
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August 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Go Theo!!!! I know its a Dramaione, but hell, I
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August 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I really what it to have more chapters then you other storie (which I will be reading right next) I can't wait to see what hppens next! Please post soon! I love the way you have written the character too very close to how I think they would have been. ;)
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August 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE, PLEASE, write more.
In merely 8 chapters you've managed to transfix me on jealousy driven Draco and chance taking Hermione. I'm already so attached to the portrayal of these characters I fear for a time when this story comes to an end, already I've begun to drive myself mad with unanswerable questions of Theo and Hermione's doomed relationship. I'm at a loss, and at your mercy.
In merely 8 chapters you've managed to transfix me on jealousy driven Draco and chance taking Hermione. I'm already so attached to the portrayal of these characters I fear for a time when this story comes to an end, already I've begun to drive myself mad with unanswerable questions of Theo and Hermione's doomed relationship. I'm at a loss, and at your mercy.
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August 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow this chapter packs a punch
Draco isn't liking the idea of Theo taking his place
I know everything will work out in the end
but it is sad to know there is heart ache in store for both theo and hermione especially when those to are making a connection
waiting for more please hurry up
Draco isn't liking the idea of Theo taking his place
I know everything will work out in the end
but it is sad to know there is heart ache in store for both theo and hermione especially when those to are making a connection
waiting for more please hurry up
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August 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
love the story!! onward to more..
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August 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like how you've decreased the elder Malfoys' bigotry.
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August 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Did he forget that they were friends?
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August 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good start