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for It's Not Over

by cpetnm

person magi
schedule October 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
reading this made me cry! Aww stupid Draco!
But at least I'm seeing that he went out of his way
to seek her out this time.

I really want a happy ending for Theo, he was so wonderful to Hermione here.
person sherlocked17
schedule October 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooooh...... That was just so tender. Omg, omg, she has to take him back.....

I'm re-reading that part where he is touching her belly.

She needs to stop working four weeks prior to the birth it's the healthy thing to do....

Tell her she has to!!!


Your writing is lovely! Keep it up!
person sherlocked17
schedule October 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Small note: Listen to Level 42 - It's over.


You gave me everything
and now I'm breaking your heart
you know that I don't mean
to tear your world apart

See what you are turning me into...
person Fotia
schedule October 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Draco announced to everyone that Hermione meant nothing to him by excluding her from the funeral, and personally by shutting her out. One small charming moment does not change reality. Going back to him now would result in her still being treated like dirt, and everyone assuming he was merely using her. Even if he does change, she needs to wait until well after she's given birth to even begin to let him back in, and make him very publicly court her.
person sherlocked17
schedule October 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Draco is so emotional impotent it is appalling and having the gaul to say to Hermione You agreed to This. Let Herm III ne kick him in the nuts. But Hermione will not do that I guess.
Your portray of this story is brilliant though!
person MzPearlz
schedule October 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Gaahhhhh.....his temper is unattractive >~> I'm sorry...I like the story though. Very nicely written, just not my exact cup of tea.(I rarely find those anyway) but please keep writiing, I have to know who she picks and what happens !! (Yes its still a who because oobviously Draco won't get his head out his ass and straighten up, I'd take Theo too!)
person sherlocked17
schedule October 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ow, that was quite exquisite! And enough Draco to make it believable! Thanks!!
schedule October 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe she even slept with Theo. They weren't even together very long and she even said she wasn't in love with him but she still slept with him.
person Sherlocked17
schedule October 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like this story it is sweet. And now Hermione bent pregnant. Only thing that annoys me is that guys always try to feed pregnant girls. Just leave it! They'll not starve themselves or the baby. Have you ever eaten when pregnant and not feeling up to it. And something else. The majority of women do not get morning sickness.... Excuse my rant...
person sarah
schedule September 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is a Great story!! I am really loving it. I can not wait for the next chapter!!