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by SpeedyTomato

person autumngold
schedule February 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Is it wrong of me to be worried about Arthur knowing Harry is back? The first person he will tattle to will be Dumbledore, who definitely doesn't have Harry's best interests in mind. Hopefully Harry won't have to deal too much with Ginny, Ron and Hermione trying to make him feel bad for leaving. Outstanding update! Your story is beyond incredible! Can't wait to find out what will happen next!
person staar
schedule February 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
man can't wait to see the faces of the rest of them when they see Harry again...and knowing all the shit that may happen..Hermione the boss and Ron always mad !!! hope it goes well....Thanks for the update !!!!!!!
person Annie
schedule January 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
There are several sentences that are hard to understand; some are missing words and/or are just grammatically incorrect. Use of additional commas might help as well.
person autumngold
schedule January 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I hope, when Dumbledore comes to them with the prophecy, that Sirius and Remus send him packing. I always thought there must be something wrong with an adult who expects children to fight a war, prophecy or not. At least Harry finally has some adults in his life that really care about him, not some like the Weasleys who say they care but bow down to whatever Dumbledore says. Wonderful update! Excellent new chapter! Can't wait for more!
person staar
schedule December 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
well the headmaster is already butting in....thanks for the update !!!!
person autumngold
schedule December 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Is it wrong that I hate Dumbledore this much? Leaving Harry in an abusive home for his "Greater Good", I just hope both Remus and Sirius are too smart to let him get his hands on Harry. I always thought that it was horrible that Dumbledore believed that only Harry could end Voldemort. Maybe, if Dumbledore had helped him as a child, Tom could have become something great instead of something evil. Outstanding update! Can't wait for more!
person autumngold
schedule October 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Outstanding new chapter! I wonder if Dumbledore will still believe in the prophecy even though Harry isn't a horcrux anymore? After all it doesn't seem as if he has done anything himself to end the war. Does he still think that Harry will be his little puppet? Can't wait for more!
person HEARTSTAR
schedule October 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
very nice
person autumngold
schedule October 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Your update is absolutely wonderful! I love Harry's California girls. Thank goodness he was finally able to find true friends. The support he got from them, plus Remus and Sirius must have been amazing to him. Especially after the Dursleys. Your story is incredible! Can't wait for more!

person Kat
schedule September 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!!! Harry as a vaguely normal teen !!! Not done in fanfiction. But if anyone can, it's you!!!