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Ch. 8

Let me get this out of the way, then I'll start my review:

" . . . And, of course, the rest had to do with seeing if Sirius, Remus and Harry were amicable to once more helping with what was going on. . . ."

The word you want is "amenable." "Amicable" refers to a situation that is peaceable, without disagreement or rancor (an amicable divorce), whereas "amenable" specifically means agreeing to something, as in your sentence above. So, for example, the meeting was amicable because both parties were amenable to fulfilling the terms. I also see a lot of "amiable/amenable" confusion, but I won't go into that now. Anyway, hope this clarifies the usages for you.

I think this started out as a great storyline, one which was different from any of your others that I can recall. I've decided that I'm not going to write more than that until I've gone back and re-read the whole story to date, because there's a strong possibility that I'd be confusing it with others of yours.

They were really smart to have Harry on the phone so he couldn't answer all their nosey questions, but it's coming !!!! loved it ...so the girlfriends are lesbians, good for Harry that he can have so many friends with no issues !!!!! Thanks for the update !!!!

Thank you for your wonderful new chapter! I do have to wonder, however, why the Weasleys think they are owed information about what Harry has beeen doing with his life? He doesn't owe them anything, they did nothing to save him from Dumbledore or the Dursleys. If it hadn't been for Remus and Sirius, Harry would still be stuck in the miserable plans Dumbledore has for him. I doubt he is safe now from them, even with his bondmates. Thank goodness Harry has people around him now that really care about him! Excellent new chapter! Can't wait to find out what will happen next!

hi
great chapter
please keep updating
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Excellent new chapter! I can't wait for Remus, Sirius and Harry to tell Dumbledore and the others to fight their own war. Also, why would they hand out their expensive phones to Dumbledore and the others before they are available to the public? Did Dumbledore help Harry get away from his abusive relatives? Because of the help Harry wasn't given, I hope that Dumbledore has to wait like everyone else for the phones. If anyone deserves them first it would be the aurors. Thank you for your Outstanding new chapter! Can't wait to see what will happen next!

loved it, like the saying goes I would love to be a fly on the wall, to see what is going to happen when they all meet again !!! Thanks for the update !!):):)

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all three of them smoking had me laughing all over the place !!!!! Thanks for the update....and lets see the reaction of all of them when they met !!!!!! see you soon ):):):):):))):)

I am so glad that Harry, Remus and Sirius have plans to deal with the Order. I can just imagine how Dumbledore is so sure that they are back to fight Voldemort. Hopefully, they won't give in to his demands. Even better would be if they let it slip that Dumbledore left him with abusive people. There is no reason that Harry had to be mental abused at the Dursleys. Dumbledore could have taken care of that easily if he had wanted to. Hopefully Remus and Sirius will make him pay for his mistakes. Fabulous update! Thank you so much for your incredible new chapter! Can't wait to see what you have planned for Harry, Remus and Sirius next!

Ch 1/Prologue: Great start.