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Too cute

I find Harry quite unbelievable. First of, was he that stupid to do that in the middle of the day and in Ron's bed and not think that he'd get caught? And then instead of being more embarrass he up and did that? He didn't even know if Ron way gay, I was hoping for at least some trepidition. And Ron thought of Hermione as his sister but not Harry? A lot of things kind of didn't add up and this was PWP at best. HArry/Ron is already and unbelievable pairing, you didn't have to make it more unbelievable by doing that.

"Harry stood up, his naked bits there for a full show."

And cum sliding down his chest, lol. Since he didn't cast a cleaning spell or anything. This minor point aside, I did enjoy reading this. Loved that Hermione and Ginny guessed what would happen. Clever girls!