Hot and steamy: Hermione looks set to have a lot of fun in the coming year. I do think she should have usedd a triple ring on each guy instead of, or in addtion to, a cock ring. A triple ring is a welded assembly of one large ring to go around the base of the cock and balls, a smaller ring to go around the base of the balls, and a smaller,yet ring on the base of the cock. It makes for delayed and intense orgasms and, set up like the cock rings are in this story, could definite provide intense control.
I quite enjoyed the story and hope you will add more chapters to the two that are posted.
Further to my last, if Hermione was feeling particularly nasty, she'd put the boys in quad-rings, same as triple rings except instead of one ring at the base of the balls, there's one ring at the base of each ball, really stretching and separating the balls for maximum sensation.
Anyway, good writing and a very hot fic, just not my bag.
I really hope you'll write more of this, I'm hooked and can't wait for more!
P.S. I hope you'll explore a lot of different fetishes in this, e.g. Foot, watersports, pegging, sissy, humiliation, cuck or anything really, even though I don't personally like all of those I think Hermione's the kind of girl who would want to try everything at least once ;)