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by Sherlocked1971

person eclectic_pet
schedule September 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, lovely. What a WONDERFUL chapter. I never imagined Astoria like this...but I LIKE!!!!

Draco, ever the greedy git. A hot submissive at home and he still has to have Granger on the side.

I was thinking about it this weekend. Hugo is half brother to both Rose AND Scorpius...that's sick. Your even more perverted then I first thought. I LOVE that about you *evil grin*!!

More, Please!!!!!!!!!
person eclectic_pet
schedule September 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hello sweety! I'm sorry to have been away so long. I got a new computer and spent 2 days setting it up, then I had to work on my novel.

Anyway...enough about me. I just got caught up to chapter 12.

I am LOVING this story. I like that Rose isn't as submissive as she appears. Plus she is one KINKY little bitch. But I love that about her!!!!

I must say, she definitely sounded like her mother, when she told Scorpius about her plans for the future. I hope Scorpius can keep her 'in line' as she obviously needs (and wants) it.

I have to run off now and work on my story or my writing groups are going to string me up by my little toes *wince and shiver*. So keep it up, I'll be back as soon as I can.
person eclectic_pet
schedule September 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, sweetie. Chapter 13 (Problem Parents) was PRICELESS!!!

Draco and his mudblood, was wonderful. I'm hoping to get a few more chapters read today.
person eclectic_pet
schedule September 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
SWEETIE!! Chapter 16 (Revenge). Both scenes in the library were HOT, HOT, HAWT!!!! The kiss with Clover and Ginny's juices was AWE inspiring.

Definitely more of that type of Hotness...PLEASE!!!!!
person eclectic_pet
schedule September 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, sweetie...I'm all caught up! The threesome was hot and sexy. This is a sweet little triad.

I know you don't have a beta, but PLEASE, please, please...MORE!
schedule August 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that threesome was Hot and Steamy. Scorpius is such a tease. But I'm glad he gave Rose a Proper Pounding!!!
More, Please!
schedule August 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, naughty, naughty, naughty. Just the way I like it. I am really getting hot and bothered by this little dose of smuttiness. More, please!
schedule August 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm still enjoying this. I did have a slight issue with Scorpius telling Rose he would do this if she wanted it. But since he is a young Dom, I can accept it. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope you find a Beta soon, it is sometimes difficult to get through sections.
schedule August 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well, I must admit this last chapter was HOT. I hope that you continue, I'm enjoying this blackmail. Wish I could help you with the Beta, but I already Beta for WildKitsune.

More, Please!!