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August 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Covering my eyes hoping to all magic and miracles that another chapter and Draco would show up soon, and what's been happening!!! Great story.
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August 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like it but I also want to know if Draco still doesn't know about the children and if so, who is the father of the other two? See,this is me being greedy and this is why I like longer stories! :)
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August 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm not typically someone who reviews, but this is a pretty cool fic. It looks like it is going to be a good one. My only issue is how glossed over the the pregnancy and the early years of the children was. I realize that it is probably a small part of the story but pregnancy is an amazing experience and twins, let alone more than twins, are quite the challenge. Anyways, I look forward to reading more.
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August 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I don't understand where the two youngest came from. Where they the outcome of harry living with twins? And why exactly the whole world was supposed to learn only after he sent his kids to Hogwarts. Did he stay in hom for all of the 11 years?
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August 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this and hope you write more to it. I would love to see how Harry dealt with Draco and the fact that he's denying his heir. I would also like to find out about his relationship with the father of his additional two children. More on the twins would be great too as well as Harry's relationship with Severus. Definitely liked this one!!
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August 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice! Although I didn't like that you did not include Dracos reaction to the News of having Children and it felt quite rushed at the end.
I would have liked seeing how Draco reacts! :)
I would have liked seeing how Draco reacts! :)
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August 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I liked what I read but I'm confused. Harry never went out in public with his children and are the 8 year olds from a different father because he senn his other five all to Hogwarts?
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July 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to the rest of the story. I'm disgusted with Draco though! Now the children are years old, Draco has lost all that and Harry has had to do it all alone. And Draco is what? Married? Fooling around around all this time?
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July 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So good, please continue with this story line.
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July 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I hope you will continue.