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March 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I totally adore the children But I feel that Draco didn't deserve Harry Potter. For so many years, Draco had rejected him despite Harry's plead for them to meet. I'm surprised Harry didn't even feel an ounce of anger or hate.
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December 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'll be glad to beta any future Drarry work you feel up to writing. You can find me on here, or my dA under the same name. Cheers!
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December 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
im happy how things ended, and everyone had a happy ending.
thank you for posting and writing this wonderful story.
thank you for posting and writing this wonderful story.
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December 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1
Very interesting storyline, but you definitely could use a beta. There are run-on sentences, lack of punctuation, and the occasional wrong word:
" . . . Unlike the Potter
Very interesting storyline, but you definitely could use a beta. There are run-on sentences, lack of punctuation, and the occasional wrong word:
" . . . Unlike the Potter
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December 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 3
Sheesh. Romantic this pairing is not! *eyeroll* Well, not yet anyway. Reading on. . . .
Sheesh. Romantic this pairing is not! *eyeroll* Well, not yet anyway. Reading on. . . .
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December 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love sweet and soppy but there's been none in this story that I can see. Neither Harry or Draco remember much of the conception. Then Harry spent the next fifteen years being a single parent. Throw in his rape and the way Draco acted during those years...no fluff. Even after Draco moved in I don't get the feeling that either of them was happy, really. Please some love,romance, happiness, something in the last chapter. Although I still feel cheated because those fifteen years are gone and can't be redone.
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December 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What in the world just happened? Harry gets ignore for over fourteen years and now just like that Harry it's going to make it easy for Draco to just marry him like nothing happened? Way too abrupt for me. Draco should grovel and suffer for being such a jerk. He should have to earn Harry's trust.
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December 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Being a romantic by nature, I wish Draco had paid attention to Harry when he was trying to tell him about the children. Why did Draco make love to Harry if he didn't care for him at least a little. Was he in love with Astoria? He said he wanted a quiet life. Was his with Astoria and his parents to social or something? I'd read more of your work but I'm only on Fanfiction.net, Adultfanfiction.net and once in a great while NNCIS Forum.
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August 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
hello.
I really like the story.
but, you said it is 5 chapters and I see only 2. and its noted as completed.
so where are thay? I REALLY WHANT TO READ THEM.
please answere me to my email as soon as posible
thanks alot.
in case you cant see it : gemrw4@walla.com
I really like the story.
but, you said it is 5 chapters and I see only 2. and its noted as completed.
so where are thay? I REALLY WHANT TO READ THEM.
please answere me to my email as soon as posible
thanks alot.
in case you cant see it : gemrw4@walla.com
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August 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story.
I'm very curious to know why Draco didn't see him, and spent a month doing sex with Harry.
Kisses
I'm very curious to know why Draco didn't see him, and spent a month doing sex with Harry.
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