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for Leaving With the Devil

by SpeedyTomato

person Tlyna
schedule July 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was a very interesting plot and a great story to the story. I know I'm going to love this.
person Tlyna
schedule July 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ack! I meant a great start to the story.
person n
schedule July 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing start, looking forward to where you are going with this.
person BAFan
schedule July 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1

This is a different twist, Hermione being the one to smell a rat. So to speak. ;-) Very, very interesting!
person MaryRoyale
schedule July 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What an interesting story idea! I've seen and read quite a few "Sirius takes care of and/or raises Harry" stories, but I don't think I've ever seen one where Hermione is the catalyst for that happening. I love the way you've started this story off and I can't wait for more-- then again, I always love your stories.

For a 14 year old girl Hermione showed amazing courage here. She was willing to give up one of her only friends to help save him. I know your focus will be on Harry, but I'm a little worried about what might have happened to Hermione in the aftermath. I hope you let us know if Dumbledore fed her hippogriffs or had her thrown in Azkaban.

Also, I'm curious as to how you'll have this one play out. In the other Sirius/Harry stories that you've written (or the ones I've read anyway) Harry is older than 13. I'm sure you'll handle it deftly. :)

Good writing, and thanks for another fic!