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for Leaving With the Devil

by SpeedyTomato

person staar
schedule October 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
well hell so many years and they still haven't killed the nut !!!!!!!!!! yes you meanie your going to put Harry in again ...well thanks for the update and see you soon !!!!!!!
person autumngold
schedule October 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Marvelous update! I am so glad that Sirius never told Remus the truth about Harry. He was so smart not to trust his former friend with what happened with Harry. It is wonderful, also, that Hermione never told Dumbledore that she helped him escape. I really think that it would be a mistake, however, for Harry to see her again. She might be too deep in Dumbledore's pocket to let Harry escape a second time. Thank you for your wonderful new chapter! Please post again soon!
person staar
schedule September 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
nice , loving it !!!! more please !!!!!!!!
person HEARTSTAR
schedule September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was wonderful and something that I think should have happened why should he have stayed I mean really sirus as a little loopy but a good guy.
person autumngold
schedule September 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your incredible new chapter! It is so good that Sirius and Harry are getting far away from England. They will be much safer away from both Voldemort and Dumbledore. I love the way they were able to tell Hermione that Harry was ok, and that she made the right decision to get him away from Hogwarts. Excellent new chapter! Can't wait for more!
person snape_lust
schedule September 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter that included quite a bit of info, but was still engaging to read.

I love the last ppg with the postcard for Hermione and her reaction to it. I'm happy that she's happy for Harry and Sirius.

Can't wait for more!
person history
schedule August 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!
On the glasses, Harry is said to have a bad sight. So having a bad sight too, i'm always surprised when he can ahve galsses in one hour. In all my life, i couldn't have a pair of glasses in one hour. It took between one and two weeks. I'm just saying it and i understand if you took liberty with it (you're the author) but i just wanted to say it.
I wonder if the wozarding world will look in Harry's life and see how the Dursley were with Harry.
person autumngold
schedule August 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for your outstanding new chapter! Sirius is very intelligent to take care of both he and Harry's vaults before they leave. Thank goodness the goblins won't tell on them. It is good that Hermione held up so well under questioning. If Dumbledore trusts her, I imagine he will be less likely to look into her mind for answers. Excellent update! Can't wait for more!
person milapink
schedule August 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Escape well planned.
I'm curious about the finances of Harry and what he will find.
He will have some surprise inheritance?
person MaryRoyale
schedule August 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love Sirius' plans. He's obviously thought quite a bit about what he'll need to do to keep himself and Harry safe and out of You-Know-Who's clutches. (Hee hee... see what I did there? Ah, I slay me.) You have me curious-- Sirius can now clearly see that something's rotten in state of Potter, if you'll forgive the god-awful pun, and I'm wondering how long it will take him to uncover all of it. I'm sure that the goblins of Gringott's can provide him with some, if not most, of the information--but will some of it come from other sources?

I loved Hermione's performance. She was absolutely right not to try and add detail--that's exactly where people *do* trip themselves up. I was chewing my nails through her bit because I kept expecting Dumbledore to Legilimens her to within an inch of her life. It appears as though she was completely successful because he underestimated her role in Harry's disappearance. I'm somewhat hoping that she gets the map back. Either for herself, or to send along to Harry. I'd hate to think of it in Dumbledore's grubby hands. I can see where she might need it for her protection--she knows too much to not be in danger at some point. Her curiosity and her sense of justice/fair-play might force her to dig a little deeper and see what else Dumbledore is doing in his spare time. If she manages to *not* get herself in horrible life-threatening danger-- the map really belongs with Harry and Sirius. I suppose Remus can claim partial ownership, but if he's in cahoots with Dumbledore then I think he's lost all rights to claim the title "Marauder".

You've set it up for Harry to have a wonderful life traveling all over the world. He'll most likely get to see and experience things that your average Muggle or wizard never does. There must be something that will make him come home though, or this will be a three or four chapter story, and yours tend to be a bit more plotty than that. :D