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August 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Draco is so very Slytherin in this, love it :) I think Harry's going to give him more of a run for his money than he's expecting. Just how in the world is he planning on robbing Gringotts with Harry under his roof? Goodness that's going to be tricky.
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August 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 4
Hmm. Elian shows his hatred of Draco in front of Harry, his superior who is also in charge of the case, as well as his fellow Aurors. Mytherian displays almost rabid disdain and jealousy of Harry in front of Draco, the supposed victim in the case, and then enlists his aid to show Harry up in the press. Harry gets very touchy-feely with Draco at times, though I can't decide if that's OOC for him or not. The first two, however, strike me as being not only inappropriate but also quite unprofessional. And yet Draco questions none of this. Well, he assumes that Harry is using techniques designed to soothe and relax him, but seems to accept the others' behavior at face value. I wonder if Harry isn't playing his own game with Draco, and all the above was deliberately staged. His sudden appearance just as Mytherian seemed about to disturb the wards was more than timely. Maybe it was timed to be that way.
Just a thought.
Hmm. Elian shows his hatred of Draco in front of Harry, his superior who is also in charge of the case, as well as his fellow Aurors. Mytherian displays almost rabid disdain and jealousy of Harry in front of Draco, the supposed victim in the case, and then enlists his aid to show Harry up in the press. Harry gets very touchy-feely with Draco at times, though I can't decide if that's OOC for him or not. The first two, however, strike me as being not only inappropriate but also quite unprofessional. And yet Draco questions none of this. Well, he assumes that Harry is using techniques designed to soothe and relax him, but seems to accept the others' behavior at face value. I wonder if Harry isn't playing his own game with Draco, and all the above was deliberately staged. His sudden appearance just as Mytherian seemed about to disturb the wards was more than timely. Maybe it was timed to be that way.
Just a thought.
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August 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about#4..
Too bad this isn't an actual cat & mouse story, I would LOVE to see
them pitt their minds against each other.
Too bad this isn't an actual cat & mouse story, I would LOVE to see
them pitt their minds against each other.
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August 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter, though it felt a little short. I'm eager to see how this turns out. Will there be a cliche standoff between Harry and Draco in the end? Hmmm...
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August 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This seems to be turning into quite a different Harry/Draco relationship with Draco being as dark as he seems to be since he is "the mask" and trying to trick Harry into his bed without caring for him. Though I think he really does but refuses to recognize it.
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August 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So far Draco is sooo Slytherin that I don't like him enough to want him to end up with Harry... He doesn't deserve him lol.
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August 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Getting a kick out of this story. Not sure how much Harry is buying into Draco's act. I think he may have his gut feelings.
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August 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter. I love the quiet authority that Harry has but that can easily turn intense when need be. I'm looking forward to see how he and Draco both handle Mytherian, that should prove an interesting challenge. Can't wait for the next update :)
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August 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #2...
The Game of Seduction. Bring it on!
This will be interesting to 'watch'. :-)
The Game of Seduction. Bring it on!
This will be interesting to 'watch'. :-)
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August 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love how draco is deceiving everyone, wait til harry finds out.