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Good ending. :-)

Go Harry! He's so awesome. I'm so glad he wasn't as clueless as he appeared and the fight with the Goblin was truly awesome.

Actually Harry pointing out how much of an idiot Draco was being about everything was exactly what I wanted. I mean Draco seemed to see signs that Harry knew so much more than what he was letting on. He just really didn't pay attention to any of them. I am interested in seeing how this ends between them. I am guessing Draco has a nice little stay in prison and maybe a semi-sweet goodbye between them before he is carted off. I shall wait semi-patiently to next Saturday and dream of more of the 'pure-blood customs' story to tide me over until then. :)

about #13..

Well dammnnn!!! O_O Watch Law & Order much? I was expecting the end theme to pop
up after reading this!

Well Draco got cocky & got caught, had a feeling Harry was faking sleep at one point, he
seemed too clever for his own good. But it's good to read a story where Harry is not the clueless boy
that some authors seem determined to make him. Doesn't that make your hair stand on end? Reading
a story where Harry is this innocent little lamb..and Draco is this suave, devious devil, especially
during the Hogwarts years and they're BOTH 16!

But, here we have a man willing to go thru lengths to get a job done...AND got the hairy kahunas to back it up. :-)

Good job author.

Oh dear... that cliffhanger. I think it was awesome that Harry came to save Draco, but now I want to know what that black sphere was. I do like that Draco realized he was an idiot even if it was too late to do as such, but I am hoping they both get out of this and have a talk or something. I am also curious as to how Harry is able to combat their magic. Two more chapters, then? Great. I can't wait to see how this end. Will it have a sequel?

Intense chapter! Love all powerful Harry. Do you think Draco will learn from this experience, assuming they get out? Sure they will but will Draco love Harry with real love not just because he can be used as a shield or because of his caring be made to do what Draco wants

about #12..

*looks at author..and doesn't say a word*

Wow, what a cliffhanger! Draco has the goblin dagger yet, so can he hurl it at the black sphere in time to save to save Harry? This has been such a risky plan from the beginning so I only hope to enjoy the rest of it. Anywho thanks for the ride!

Ohhhhhh... Now that is an interesting and unexpected twist. And its hard to do something that truly surprises me so well done there. So everything is working out for Draco`s plan but the goblins were ready for him. I kept waiting for Harry to show up and let Draco know he knew everything. I know...giving Harry too much credit there lol. But the goblins didn't kill Draco. So was his low level goblin informant a plant? Have they been testing Draco this whole time or maybe took advantage of this opportunity when it came up? Regardless of this I'm very interested to see what they have planned for Draco. I think his next task will be even harder. Don't think they want or need Harry for anything though.127

about #11...

Why oh WHY, couldn't that child have stayed home and been good a couple of days??? If he was so
adamant about getting into Gringotts, he could have waited a few days past the deadline, with the hope that
could have created seeds of doubt that maybe Draco was taking the goblins threat seriously & he wouldn't try to
break into the bank. But, instead he could plan a better attack.

Well, so much for that thought.