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for Nature of the Beast

by Lomonaaeren

person SP777
schedule November 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #18...

Well this was a nice reprieve of sorts. Good to see HArry is getting comfortable
with his mate, tho' he doesn't realize it. Will the bond ever be established?
person delia cerrano
schedule November 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
All I can read or see in my minds' eye is Draco as a giant stork or flamingo...long skinny legs, feather covered egg shaped body, wings instead of arms and a beak with a squaking bird voice. Please say he still is the handsome elegant Malfoy but with nice looking wings attached to his back. He still has arms and a kissable mouth right?
person SP777
schedule November 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #17..

Aww..this was too cute! :-)

Well I'm glad they're making...or I should say Harry is making some type of progress
in accepting the bond. At least, it will give Draco some peace of mind, for now and
with that said...where's the danger you're going to throw at us? :-)
person delia cerrano
schedule November 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
They're getting closer and closer. I'm surprised that Ron is so easy about it all. More than Hermione even.
person eros
schedule November 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Still enjoying this a lot, i'm wondering if the bond itself will start to heal over time as they are closer to each other and not--- well trying to kill one another lol
person SP777
schedule November 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
about #16...

You should have called this one 'Revelations'. Draco finally has some idea what might be
'wrong' with Harry, if he's as smart as I think he is and Maundy really showed her true colors, that's
a bold witch I'll say that much on her.

Good chapter, with intense moments.
person delia cerrano
schedule November 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well at least Maundy showed her true colors and Draco seemed to show that all was well with Harry & him at least to the public. Harry did his share by saying he was living in Malfoy Manor now.
person Marron
schedule November 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Foolish woman. To even try something when Harry has a Veela mate. She should know that Draco would watch her and everyone else as a potentional threat.
Good chapter, showed Harry's intelligence and how he watchedc Draco.
person Meechypoo
schedule November 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Dangerous indeed! Causing Harry physical pain while leaving his meeting will only garner her an enemy in both Draco and Harry and at this point I wonder who is the more dangerous of the two?! Everyone expects Draco to defend Harry fiercely because he is his Veela mate, but why is it everyone underestimates Harry so much? Just because he's preaching peace doesn't mean he won't defend himself from those that mean to cause harm! Can't wait until the next chapter.

~~ Meechy
person delia cerrano
schedule November 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
No one else saw Maundys'wand work then Harry hurting? Bet Harry's going to be glad of having Draco around and caring for him.
Draco is feeling easier, I think, the more he finds out about how and what Harry believes and is trying to do. Knowledge does seem to empower Draco or at least make him more understanding.