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for Nature of the Beast

by Lomonaaeren

person Meechypoo
schedule March 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loved the confrontation with Narcissa. She needed to be shown directly that Harry is what Draco wants and that Harry isn't to go slinking off "meekly" into the night so that Draco can have the "perfect" submissive mate. Poor Camilla! She reminded me of a selected bride for Eddie Murphy in the movie "Coming to America". All she needed to do was bark like a dog and jump up and down on one foot, but just like Eddie went to America to find the bride he wanted, Draco will fight for Harry because he has realized that Harry IS what he wants and needs in a mate!

~~ Meechy
person SP777
schedule March 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #31....

Now that Draco has somewhat eased the mind of his VERY exasperating mate...NOW can we
see the surprise? :-)
person Meechypoo
schedule March 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! I'm so glad Draco overheard the conversation between Harry and Ron and found out about Narcissa's manipulations. He was able to then taken an active role in convincing Harry that it is him that he wants for a mate no matter how troubled their start may have been. When Draco confronts Narcissa again it could be quite ugly.

~~ Meechy
person SP777
schedule March 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #30..

Conniving Harpy...and WHERE is Draco?
person HopingForKarma
schedule March 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hello Lemon!
I have been a huge fan of yours for....I think months now? And I saw you did an amazing little two-shot ficlet which just made my week! I was wondering if you do those often or take 'requests' of sort for it? I have an idea in mind for one, but I am not sure I have the ability to achieve what I want in the fic if I were to write it. And you are incredible with getting into depth of characters when it comes to Harry and Draco.
If you're curious, I dont know if you know this song, but Taylor Swifts 'blank space' where she sings basically about someone whom, in relationships, is rather crazy and the person that chases the crazy person is seeking money or fame or what have you and knows what the 'game' is about.
I would love the idea of a fic of Harry wanting to date Draco based on his reputation as a crazy boyfriend, and finding he enjoys the crazy and goes back to him time and time again.
If this is not to your liking or you're busy or anything at all I understand :) I just had to ask because I am too big a fan of yours not to at least gently test the waters. Since I know you would do a great job of it!
Otherwise, (I dont know if you read fictions here or on FF) I can attempt it :)!

Thank you for reading!
HopingForKarma

I didnt know where to send so I put here and on livejournal!
schedule March 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Narcissa you fucking ___! She twisted Harry's thoughts... I hope Draco is able to fix this, or see what Narcissa has done, sooner than later.
person eros
schedule March 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I've always simi enjoyed Narcissa in the books but i'm disliking her here lol ><
~Eros
person Fotia
schedule March 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I hope that Draco banishes his mother when he finds out what she's done. I don't know that I can stand the suspense until then.
person Hestia
schedule March 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you're okay. I was a bit worried because you hadn't updated for a while. I love this story. I wish I did not start reading it until you were done because I'm impatient and want the whole thing now. Narcissa is being a bully. Poor Harry thinking he is an abuser like his family. This could totally mess with his mind.
person Hestia
schedule March 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oops forgot I had a question...

Are you going to say anything about not being with a guy before now? Maybe I can't remember something, but Harry was hetero and now he is in a relationship with a man. He seems to be accepting of this.