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for Nature of the Beast

by Lomonaaeren

person eros
schedule April 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
cuddles are always fun ^^

~Eros
person Ciara_D
schedule April 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed this chapter and how Harry and Draco made it work; I think they found they're own terms, somewhat. Draco arrogantly saying "his submissive" would have a political life was just grin worthy.
person SP777
schedule April 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #34...

Because Harry is different and STRONG , no attributes of a submissive can
be placed on Harry, not the Defeater of Voldemort! *nyah* :-p

THEREFORE for the first time in Veela history you are looking at a bond where
the submissive can stand side by side with their dominant!

Any questions?
person Meechypoo
schedule April 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Harry is showing his deep trust in Draco to stand against this new opposing group. Too bad they are being led by their pure-blood noses into something by someone who has already shown to simply hate Harry and anything he stands for. Draco and Harry are walking a tight line with Harry "pretending" to be Draco's true submissive, but what no one realizes, even Harry and Draco to some extent, is just how close the two of them really are to having a true Veela bond. Throw out the old conceptions of Dom and submissive, and what you get are two people who are perfect foils for each other. Harry and Draco have always been that and now they have learn to look past the normal views and to what works best for them. I can't wait until the next chapter, and Draco...and maybe Harry....get a chance to answer Horaldo's questions.

~~ Meechy
person SP777
schedule April 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
about #33..

It's moments like these that make reading fanfictions worthwhile. :-)
person eros
schedule March 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I knew smutty-ness------- though it was nice too cause it had plot bunnies? kinda' with the bond haha ^^ and i really enjoyed the little nose flick haha!!

~eros
person Meechypoo
schedule March 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, Draco give Harry a blow job and the once somewhat dormant bond flared to life! Harry is now fully committed to trying to make the best of this situation and with luck learn how very good the two of them are together! So doing my happy dance now.

~~ Meechy
person Anon
schedule March 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I was just wondering why I enjoy reading about these characters in different stories and realized it's because I'm already invested in them. It's really great because you've come up with all these wonderful stories that don't follow the HP universe but you don't have to take time in writing to make me care about them because I already do even though they are not the same as in the books.

Nit pick (from other stories): How do people pant and let their tongues hang out? Really during sex who let's their tongue hang out? Maybe it's just me, but every time I read that I try and it's not really possible.

Is it wrong to ask where you are from?

I love Nature of the Beast. I like how their bond is slowly developing. You are amazingly talented. I can't wait to read more.
person eros
schedule March 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awe sexy fun lemon type deal looks around the corner haha
person delia cerrano
schedule March 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Loved the way Draco set it all up and how it played out. Wish the chapter had continued for a few more paragraphs...it was just getting so romantically sexy.