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Looks like they maybe are calming down and doing more thinking it all through or starting to, mostly Harry so far. Draco is still a bit in shock still and thinking about everything more than making any more "in stone" declarations.

Harry is so hardheaded. Maybe now that Draco is knocked out he'll believe. Or maybe if someone else much older told him that everything Draco said is true he'll believe. Beautiful story! When do you update?

I know this is supposed to be a longer story with all the "good stuff" but I can't help but feel as though it would serve Harry right to see Draco burst into flames or whatever. He'd have to live with the fact that he killed Draco in some way and maybe try to go back and fix it. Either way, lovely story and I look forward to reading more. :)

Marvellous work on all your story's. I'll task myself to read them all while waiting for this great tale to proceed. Keep up all the good work.

So still enjoying it kinda' hoping it doesn't go they're together so Draco doesn't die, even if that is just the original cause hopefully it doesn't stay that way


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Poor Draco! I feel soo bad for him. I know that Harry doesn't know or care much about pure blood traditions but he is doing a major job on Draco with out even saying "lets talk about this in private". I really don't much like Harry right now even though he is normally an empathic person and kind to people who seem to be troubled.

about #2..

Poor Draco, this just isn't his day. Hopefully a temporary compromise can be worked out.

Noooo! You cannot stop there! I thought the first chapter was hilarious how Draco was so confident and wanted everyone to see him claim Harry and how Harry was so matter of fact and NOT submissive in how he told Draco that basically he was barking up the wrong tree. Totally perfect. It will be very interesting to see if they both prove to be dominant mates. Draco will have to really work to win Harry over and Harry will have a hard time believing that yes his arch enemy really does want to crazy love and protect him forever even if he doesn't need or want that protection. But I think that kind of love will appeal to Harry once he gets stuck with having to help Draco for Draco's safety. That actually worked out really well because Harry would not be interested in helping Draco because he's a prat but he will help Draco because he needs it.

Ah you meanie... leaving chapter two there.

Sweet! I love how this is starting out!

Nice first chapter ^^