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Another fun wonderful chapter! Serving Harry up on virginal silver platter...hehe, I love how Ron is turning into the biggest fangirl. And I just have to say it, Ginny you freakin idiot! At least this will scare the shit out of Harry and send him running right where we want him to...hopefully...

I like how Blaise is just sitting back watching it all, I find it interesting that he's figuring it out so much faster than Hermione, he's going to be good for Ron :) Also Ron may be onto something about locking them in a closet ;) Looking forward to the next part.

Ch. 2

Very interesting premise! Totally OOC for Ron, but as you said, this is fan fiction! I'm curious, though, as to how Ron is going to persuade Ginny that she doesn't want to date Harry.

One correction:

"Madam Pomfrey came in to tell them that they had to be a little quieter in which they both nodded to agree."

It should be "at which," not "in which."

I'm on to the next chapter!

Ch. 3

That was very clever of Ron. I know others have said this already, but I'm glad he isn't a complete prat in this story.

Great idea to make Ron to get them together...and it's true Ron is either never in the stories or an ass...love this one can't wait for more....Thank you for it and see you soon !!!!!!!!!

This is a great fun story! I think Ron's big project might be taking a twist. He might need to find someone for "Princess Ginny" who will treat her how she wishes and get her mind off Harry. He"ll have to make Draco look at Harry as a raw undeveloped jewel of a prospective boyfriend. He sure doesn't seem very impressed right now. Loving the way Blaise is getting more and more intrigued by oblivious Ron!

Another fun chapter. Getting a kick out of this Ron of yours. Always disliked Ron so it's cool to read him so changed...and maybe with Zabini yet? Bonus!! Never liked Ginny (or Mrs Weasley)so I'm glad to read she will be out of his love life shortly
a showing her true motives. I guess neither Harry or Draco have wondered about these attitude changes but maybe Severus Snape
will being more crafty then anyone else.

Hi! Loving it so far! I really like how you portray Ron, especially since he is a great strategist. And I'm not sure if it's too late but plz Ron/Hermione? Plzz.

Mhmmm I like how your establishing the lack there of of any real intimacy between Harry and Ginny, I'm interested to see how she'll try to handle it and if it will make Harry Super uncomfortable with her trying to pry into him. I'm liking Blaise so far too, it would be fun if Ron could get him on his plan to get Harry and Draco together - They could scheme together while they fall for each other ;) Also I loved how weirded out Snape was with a grinning Ron serving detention!

And two chapters within like a week, yay! You're doing great :)

haha love the image of Ron hexed and loopy but deliriously happy anyway. I'm interested to see how you handle Ginny, that should make for some nice drama :)

If you plan to pair hermione and pansy then you need to add a f/f warning to your story