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November 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, so sorry for the late review! Is it possible to blink and have a week go by? Nice chapter, I'm glad Draco kissed him back and only slightly miffed he stopped it but I know he was right to :( What with Harry just very recently becoming single! Damn Draco for being so mature but he DID kiss him, which means - if only momentarily - that he's interested in Harry in that way. I can't wait to find out how he reacted when he got back to Blaise.
"Harry was not going to turn him into his vision of Harry!"
That line had me bursting out laughing because, oh Ron, you totally are turning into your vision of Harry. Loved that whole scene with them chatting and Ron completely unable to keep his dirty mind in check (Speaking of which I'm writing the epilogue of TAOSB and they totally keep trying to be completely filthy with each other in a way that doesn't exactly fit in that story and all I can think is that Ron has poisoned my mind!!!) I was a bit confused of what Ron wanted Harry to do about Draco, did you mean like have him just coyly flirting with him randomly and then changing the subject? I like the idea of the cooking contest though and I'm so very excited for the next chapter!
SO if your muse needs a poke here it is: POKE POKE! Oh yes, potent I know ;)
Hope you update soon.
"Harry was not going to turn him into his vision of Harry!"
That line had me bursting out laughing because, oh Ron, you totally are turning into your vision of Harry. Loved that whole scene with them chatting and Ron completely unable to keep his dirty mind in check (Speaking of which I'm writing the epilogue of TAOSB and they totally keep trying to be completely filthy with each other in a way that doesn't exactly fit in that story and all I can think is that Ron has poisoned my mind!!!) I was a bit confused of what Ron wanted Harry to do about Draco, did you mean like have him just coyly flirting with him randomly and then changing the subject? I like the idea of the cooking contest though and I'm so very excited for the next chapter!
SO if your muse needs a poke here it is: POKE POKE! Oh yes, potent I know ;)
Hope you update soon.
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November 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
man your back !!!! you have been missed I thought I would go nuts without my updates here... so ok Harry is kind of very dense here....but so cute Ron 's charter has me laughing all over the place and that's good since I'm not a fan of him or Ginny ....Thanks again and hope this time to see you soon with another update !!!!!!!!!!!
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November 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh Ron, and his planning ^_^ please update chapter 15 soon.
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November 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay so glad your back! I was this close (holds fingers centimeters apart) from trying to give your muse a little metaphorical poke with a stick ;) Lovely chapter, its strange seeing Draco so nice and wise, especially towards Ginny but it's nice, I like this side of him. Though I'm curious to see if Ginny's really going to actually be okay with them getting together once it happens. Loved the end especially, so cute sitting on the tower together and oh he kissed him! Ahhh way to go Harry! Is it too much to hope that Draco will be happy about it? Pretty pretty please?
And I never thought I'd say this but I miss Ron! So nice having all that Harry and Draco but couldn't help but miss the conniving red head. Can't wait for more!
And I never thought I'd say this but I miss Ron! So nice having all that Harry and Draco but couldn't help but miss the conniving red head. Can't wait for more!
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October 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love the scheming nature of our four favorite boys, they truly bring the best of each other. I'm so proud of Harry for taking a leep in his self confidence and kissing Draco ^_^ please update chapter 14 soon.
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October 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
your back !!!!!! OMG Harry so forward !!! he kissed Draco !!yes yes yes they are all so cute together , I love harry and Draco but man Ron and Blaise is a sure very close 2nd...hermione and Pansy never seen that but ok with it ...and Ginny well find here someone ok /Dean!!!! this was so good and thanks again !!!! see you soon !
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October 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well that went better than I could have ever imagined. I'm sorry that Harry broke up with Ginny so harshly, but am glad their relationship is finally over. Both Harry and Draco haven't really realized just how right they are for each other, but at least Harry is pushing them in the right direction. I can't wait until the next chapter to find out what Draco's reaction to the kiss will be!
~~ Meechy
~~ Meechy
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October 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Just found your story and I absolutely LOVE IT!!! Ron and Blaise are just so cute together I would never have thought to put those two together and without Hermione around him Ron is much less annoying. I can't wait to see Harry break up with the annoying red-headed weasel, I have never liked her and truly think Harry is much better off with Draco (and let's face it those two are just so dam HOT together lol). Great story and I can't wait for more :)
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October 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I think this is this one of my new favorite chapters :) Absolutely loved how Ron and Harry and Draco and Blaise had pretty the same conversation before the trip and it was fun seeing the difference in their reactions to it - and I LOVE that harry and Draco are now scheming (if only a bit) to get Ron and Blaise together as well. Also your little warning disclaimer for this chapter had me giggling, don't know why but I just found it supremely funny ;) Ron and Blaise were so stinking adorable on their date, loved it, and I can't wait to see how Draco and Harry's day went (so update fast pretty pretty please?)
Ginny's going to need to committed to a mental institution soon if she keeps this up. Good grief, like asking Harry to relieve all his most horrible and private moments for her to watch like a movie could possibly be a good idea. Someone needs to smack her. Loved both their reaction to it through and how Harry immediately sought out Draco's presence. Muahhh ginny your an idiot but thanks for pushing him completely away! Can't wait for the next update.
Ginny's going to need to committed to a mental institution soon if she keeps this up. Good grief, like asking Harry to relieve all his most horrible and private moments for her to watch like a movie could possibly be a good idea. Someone needs to smack her. Loved both their reaction to it through and how Harry immediately sought out Draco's presence. Muahhh ginny your an idiot but thanks for pushing him completely away! Can't wait for the next update.
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October 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Maybe further into the story ron walks in on draco spanking harry