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for Beloved misfit

by Sasunarufan13

schedule July 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Now I must start by saying that I usually cringe away from Mpreg stories, I just can't do them, don't know why just can't. BUT I'm really glad I gave this one a chance because I've been thoroughly enjoying it. It's so sad and heartbreaking, poor Harry. I can't decide if I want Harry to finally crack and unleash his rage upon his in-laws or if I want Draco to find out and him to explode for them both...maybe both actually. Either way something has got to be done, Harry cannot keep living like this and Draco needs to know!!!! Greatly looking forward to the next part, keep up the great work :)

Oh and please please don't make harry lose his magic or his second baby!
person n
schedule July 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the clarification!
Great chapter, I just wish Draco would wise up about how his parents treat Harry, either by witnessing it personally or by Harry finally telling him.
To be honest, nothing short of no contact whatsoever will improve this situation, even then I'm not sure they wouldn't fall back to their old behaviour when they are alone with Harry.
Hope Harry survives this pregnancy more or less unscathed.
Until next chapter.
person Tigergirl
schedule July 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please! Oh, please please PLEASE! Please tell me that like on the day Harry has the baby Draco's parents say something and he finally gives them the royal, hormonal send off IN FRONT of Draco. Or at least in front of Snape. The man's smart. He'd put two and two together and could get through to Draco with explaining. Ooh! I could also picture smart little Scorp telling his grandparents off. Kids pick up on things like that. LOL Please continue! I am thoroughly enjoying this story.
person delia cerrano
schedule July 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying it...sort of. Not a fan of angst. Just a whiff of angst is enough for me. I hope you rub the Malfoys' faces in the dirt for the way they are treating Harry. And how dumb is Draco not to connect the dots. He's a slytherin and over the years...he knows how they are...they must have slipped up more than once and given him a clue!
person Janelle
schedule July 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love it! You are a grand writer of angst! My heart was aching for Harry and I was super worried that the Malfoy's would start belittling Scorpius and that would be Harry's boiling point. I'm so happy they're having another child and I can't wait for the next installment.

Happy writing.
person AidaLily
schedule July 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. I just really wish that Draco would overhear them or Harry would speak up. Draco deserves to know what stresses Harry out so much and if Harry can't say it then he could give Draco those memories or something granted it would be better if they said it and Draco overheard it. Can't wait to read the next and last? part of it.
person blj.14
schedule July 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just love mpreg stories. Sad though how the elder Malfoys act. I know everyone wants to believe the best of their parents,but surely Draco must have a clue? I'm counting on that happy ending.
person n
schedule July 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed it, but I have a question.
Why go to Narcissa in the first place to get in contact with Draco (other than as a plot point to show her disdain)? There were other methods open to Harry.
Why not use his Patronus to contact him?
If that was not possible due to some kind of magical restriction in his state, then why not have Kreacher get him? He managed to notify Draco when Harry had fainted, so he should be able to do the same thing in this situation.

Anyway, looking forward to part two.