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for My Best Friend's Father

by Astrid-Lemons

schedule July 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
As annoying as the stares were for her, that was a fun chapter. I grinned through most of it and I am happy they are so in love/lust and happy. :-) I am glad he heard her confession and I hope he makes one to her soon, so that she doesn't get crazed wondering. Draco was fabulous and cracks me up. Thank you, hon! HG4eva
person sheedy
schedule July 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ahh much better now.I started my weekend with a new chapter to read.
person delia cerrano
schedule July 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yes you are right Fluffy and fun. I think I remember that Draco has a partner in this story. If so are we going to read about them together. Your vision of draco is over the top great! Love to read about him and his partner. And yes what's up with changeble Lucious?
schedule July 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, does Lucius need meds? lol kidding. His insecurity was a huge surprise! I know others may see it as just him being loud, mean, and overbearing, but I think he just needs to learn to talk to people. He also needs to really get to know her, so that he realizes she is not a docile woman. She needs to learn to stop stomping off. lol And there's more trouble to come, huh? I wonder in what form... Finally, yes I did LOVE Draco's flip out. lol I laughed out loud, so thank you!! Until next time, HG4eva
person sheedy021065@yahoo.com
schedule July 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo updates!! Draco is so awesome. And you my dear are a tease. So close for our pair of love birds...swoon
person delia cerrano
schedule July 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is such a goo fun story! Your Draco is so original...unique. His appearances and comments are so entertaining. I hope he shows up a lot. Couldn't you do a story with that version of Draco paired with messy, no fashion sense but very practical manly Harry?
person Heaven
schedule July 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. Thanks for sharing it. :-)
schedule July 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am really glad I missed the last update, so that I didn't have to stop here. lol So far, so good. :-) Off to chapter 5... HG4eva
schedule July 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, that was a very sweet chapter. :-) I foresee a lot more arguing as they get to really know one another, but for now, they're happy and learning to like each other. What a lovely date and engagement. Draco cracks me up!! Thank you, HG4eva
schedule July 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I fall in love with each chapter of more of your story and Draco. LIHO only immagginato But tell me, or is there something between Snape and Ginny?