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for Innocence Grown *COMPLETE*

by Talented_Mrs_Lupin

schedule July 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
O.O Someone needs to pull a Molly Weasley and make that girl part of the family asap! Poor Nat. Great twists though. I wonder how Lidia will react to Kale's message. Hopefully in a hilarious manner lol. Cant wait to read more!
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schedule July 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
aww that is sad:( maybe Lidia can be her new family?
well please update again soon
schedule June 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love how fast you get these out. You are amazing. I like the start of this! Nat seems interesting and I hope Remus doesn't suddenly decide to be standoffish with Lidia. Honestly though, I can't find it in myself to feel bad for Scorpius. We all make choices in life and have to face the consequences and he repeatedly made the choice to be mean, hurtful and harass a girl. He may not approve of hitting women, but what he did fell in the same lines. In the end, it came back to bite him. Yes, Lidia did something that caused it in a sense, but so did he. Besides, I think not getting what he wants this time may actually do him some good. It got him out of Europe and into a completely different culture with nearly completely new people. Should really open his eyes. Plus it gives him and Lidia a chance at a new starting point so that maybe they can at least become friends (or just tolerate one another lol) Can't wait to read more!
schedule June 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What kind of teacher allows students to behave like that!? There should never be a need to have another student point out how wrong you were like that. Sheesh, I hope that man learned from that experience, especially AFTER he had already told one student to stop harassing her! *shakes her head* Nice to see Scorp is going to try and get along! Can't wait to read more.