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for Mercy

by pip

person Yaw613
schedule July 16, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

person Anonymous
schedule January 4, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Please write a sequel to this story. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

person Yaw613
schedule April 11, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I really appreciated it and liked it a lot. Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much.

person JayDee
schedule July 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I didn't see the ending coming, even with the clue of the bird, or the way the door goes into the gift shops. Were you inspired by the Harry Potter theme parks that were set up? Very evocative of loneliness, and also of failing with age. It's proper storytelling, this.
person rescue25
schedule July 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well written but very outside of my usual fare.

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