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for The Art of Shadow Boxing

by Tommy-Lane

person Rrose
schedule August 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So much tension and places to explore! Now Madame knows his weakness. Can't wait to see what's next.
person delia cerrano
schedule August 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm still having some trouble seeing Draco as a fighter. Almost as much trouble seeing Harry as a smoker...well I kind of can in some versions of Harry. What on earth can that evil seeming woman have on Mr fancy pants Draco become a rough fighter type?
person lissagal
schedule July 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please end this cliffy. I wish to feel the emotional turmoil that follows the breaking and putting back together of Draco Malfoy.
person serilla
schedule July 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooo! The dreaded cliff hanger - love it. Love the flash back - get a real insight into what appears to be the start of Harry and Draco becoming very close - though Hermoine and Ron don't appear at all keen on that happening. So Draco disappeared for 3 months........who, what and why where involved..........The Light or the Dark? Can't wait for the next chapter. Your story really has me hooked. :)
schedule July 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really liked this chapter. I'm really curious about what made Draco leave the wizarding world and what is behind his panic attacks. Can't wait for the next chpater
person serilla
schedule July 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Harry and Draco sparring - seems to be a lot of UST........ maybe? But then as the story goes on you get the feeling that something very, very bad has happen to Draco. Harry has certainly thrown Dracos world off kilter and whatever Draco is hiding from is slowly being revealed no matter how much he tries to hide from it . Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
schedule July 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love your story! I think the flashbacks actually help the story along, they don't seem to be just random flashes instead they help me to understand some of the emotions and reasoning behind how Draco is handling things. I really like the emotional tension going on between Harry and Draco it's much better than some stories where they just randomly get together and have lots of sex....mind you I can't wait till there is lots of sex lol :)You're doing a great job and I can't wait for more!
schedule July 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So far I love it!
It is sooooo different from the rest that it caught my attention and kept it! Can't wait to read more actually!
I like the flash backs, helps me understand where they come from and the previous history that is necessary to understand the relations they have to one another.
Keep up the good work!
Owl
person serilla
schedule July 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The flash back was very intriguing - seems Draco has always been able to "feel" magic. Harry a travel writer - interesting. Till next chapter. :)
person thrnbrooke
schedule July 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm very curious about the past. What is Draco's body hiding? Soooo need more!!! What happened not only between them but with everything?