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November 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap, can't wait for more! :)
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November 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Still loving the story!!
Just wanted to point out a correction for you since (I think I remember reading this) English is not your first language?
[It's true isn't it? Just look where we are! How is this not negatively affecting you?!" I bite out, desperate for him to see and except it, except it with the very core of his being so he can do what he needs when the time comes.] In this paragraph it should be 'accept' not 'except'. :) They sound so similar it's an easy mistake!
Keep up the good work!!
Just wanted to point out a correction for you since (I think I remember reading this) English is not your first language?
[It's true isn't it? Just look where we are! How is this not negatively affecting you?!" I bite out, desperate for him to see and except it, except it with the very core of his being so he can do what he needs when the time comes.] In this paragraph it should be 'accept' not 'except'. :) They sound so similar it's an easy mistake!
Keep up the good work!!
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November 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really need to kick my muse in the behind at times. However, as another RWS has been posted finally you get another long review!
Ch. 21 - I loved the flashback. I loved how Harry was like 'screw this, you are mine' and completely destroyed Draco's resistance to leaving him. I think it showed how much they truly love each other and didn't truly want to deny giving themselves to each each other. I think I would have laughed a bit if you made it Ginny. It would have made eerily chilly sense. However, I am happy to find out I was right it was the Carrow. I think Draco was stupid to go visit her though I know he needed to. It may have been better if he stayed or even left with Harry as opposed to dealing with the crazy woman. How exactly DID they capture Harry?
Ch. 22 - It is very interesting that they set it up for Harry to finally find Draco in Thailand and I knew it! I knew that last Horcrux hadn't actually been destroyed, and I think Draco should have been honest with Harry. They could have found a way to destroy it so they never had to be in this situation or at least not had to worry about two crazy women trying to bring back Voldemort or sacrifice them or something. I hope they are able to get out of this but it doesn't seem like they will be able to. Maybe Ron and Hermione... or perhaps the Malfoy family ring that Draco gave to Harry will work. I am curious to read the next chapter!
Ch. 21 - I loved the flashback. I loved how Harry was like 'screw this, you are mine' and completely destroyed Draco's resistance to leaving him. I think it showed how much they truly love each other and didn't truly want to deny giving themselves to each each other. I think I would have laughed a bit if you made it Ginny. It would have made eerily chilly sense. However, I am happy to find out I was right it was the Carrow. I think Draco was stupid to go visit her though I know he needed to. It may have been better if he stayed or even left with Harry as opposed to dealing with the crazy woman. How exactly DID they capture Harry?
Ch. 22 - It is very interesting that they set it up for Harry to finally find Draco in Thailand and I knew it! I knew that last Horcrux hadn't actually been destroyed, and I think Draco should have been honest with Harry. They could have found a way to destroy it so they never had to be in this situation or at least not had to worry about two crazy women trying to bring back Voldemort or sacrifice them or something. I hope they are able to get out of this but it doesn't seem like they will be able to. Maybe Ron and Hermione... or perhaps the Malfoy family ring that Draco gave to Harry will work. I am curious to read the next chapter!
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November 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
They are really stuck!! I hope Harry is as super powerful as I always picture him as and can break through Sofiya's nonsense
and save them both crushing her and Alecto absolutely. Yes, for sure that's what I'd like. And then Harry can reasure Draco that he still loves him greatly...that everyone makes mistakes and everyone has some bad in them. They have to continue fighting it, right? Right. At least in my brain it's right but then I'm super tired tonight.
and save them both crushing her and Alecto absolutely. Yes, for sure that's what I'd like. And then Harry can reasure Draco that he still loves him greatly...that everyone makes mistakes and everyone has some bad in them. They have to continue fighting it, right? Right. At least in my brain it's right but then I'm super tired tonight.
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November 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh I hope Harry ate his wheaties and remembers he has Dracos'ring because I want him to pound that Safiya to itty bitty bits & her buddy also! I can't take much more of Draco thinking she's sooo beautiful, smarter than any wizard, and her evil is so special. Harry just has to DEMOLISH her then tell Draco "I told you so". He should give Draco a hard time for not having more faith in him too.
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November 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loathe cliffhangers, they're a copout.
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October 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I read this chapter and just had to review right away. Don't worry. You will get your Strategy fix again hopefully by Tuesday. The plan is Monday, but I am giving myself some leeway. lol.
Now... why did you have to end the chapter with that cliffhanger? I think you just wanted to be mean to me. *sniffles* I mean really. First, I think it is wonderful that Draco gave Harry that ring now that something else is going on. I am also thinking something else in my lovely theories. I mean what if... there is another player in all of this. I just didn't think of it before. She could have set everything up to get "her" Harry. As if. I'd rather see Harry with Pansy, but it could be possible. I mean Madam Safiya could actually be Ginny or Molly Weasley who were upset with Harry for not choosing her/her daughter. All the Weasley's have red hair, but I don't quite remember if Molly had red hair or just close to it.
Until I figure out who that is, Madam Safiya shall hence be known as Madam Safiya Bellatrix Carrow-Weasley or Madam S. B. C-W.
As for what Draco was doing, I am surprised that Harry didn't follow him. I mean I know he is settled down and dear lord a Harry that thinks first is wonderful, but if that was my lover, I'd be tracking him to make sure I could help protect him. I knew that something was bad especially when Harry's blood was taken. I mean who takes a person's blood if they are not using it for some nefarious purpose. I hope you aren't planning to kill one of them off.
Now... why did you have to end the chapter with that cliffhanger? I think you just wanted to be mean to me. *sniffles* I mean really. First, I think it is wonderful that Draco gave Harry that ring now that something else is going on. I am also thinking something else in my lovely theories. I mean what if... there is another player in all of this. I just didn't think of it before. She could have set everything up to get "her" Harry. As if. I'd rather see Harry with Pansy, but it could be possible. I mean Madam Safiya could actually be Ginny or Molly Weasley who were upset with Harry for not choosing her/her daughter. All the Weasley's have red hair, but I don't quite remember if Molly had red hair or just close to it.
Until I figure out who that is, Madam Safiya shall hence be known as Madam Safiya Bellatrix Carrow-Weasley or Madam S. B. C-W.
As for what Draco was doing, I am surprised that Harry didn't follow him. I mean I know he is settled down and dear lord a Harry that thinks first is wonderful, but if that was my lover, I'd be tracking him to make sure I could help protect him. I knew that something was bad especially when Harry's blood was taken. I mean who takes a person's blood if they are not using it for some nefarious purpose. I hope you aren't planning to kill one of them off.
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October 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Confusing but good. I want Draco free of that horrible woman and back with Harry where he belong please. What is all that smoke? Is he drugged? Silly question! Whewre's Harry did he follow him I hope?
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October 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm so so sorry I haven't reviewed sooner. I planned to update and review sooner, but things got in the way. *offers Harry and Draco cuteness on a silver platter*
Ch. 17 - I really hope that Harry told that bitch... err... Ginny off at some point. I hope there is a memory that basically has Harry telling her she is a fame-whore and how much he wants to be with Draco. Ugh. Hermione should have let Draco hex the stupid... *insert explicatives here* It is nice that Harry came back to make it all up to Draco though. So cute. I loved the reassurances before the match. Very nice and sweet with them. But seriously... does Harry need constantly laid lol.
Ch. 18 - I hope there isn't too bad of something going to happen since they defied Madam Safiya Bellatrix Carrow. I loved the hot little sex scene between them. Oh god.. Harry is such a hot submissive. Don't believe me... ask Ron... he creates whole strategies around that fact. lol. I am happy Draco won the match with the new stipulations. I was afraid for a moment that he hadn't.
Ch. 19 - Is some of that darkness still in Draco or did they destroy it? I wasn't sure, but I will just re-read it when I am less tired. Oh gosh... they are so happy together. I really hope that Madam S.B.C. won't give them too many problems. He keeps thinking 'its time' and so I know you are getting closer to the end and I can't help but to be very curious. I am happy him and Blaise were just friends, but poor Blaise. He needs someone to take care of him and focus on him considering all those mental issues. I am surprised he took the ring with the Malfoy crest on it. I am wondering why he decided to show the ring now and if it has something to do with what is about to happen.
Can't wait for the next update! I am curious as to how this is going to go and end. I hope you don't kill one of them off.
Ch. 17 - I really hope that Harry told that bitch... err... Ginny off at some point. I hope there is a memory that basically has Harry telling her she is a fame-whore and how much he wants to be with Draco. Ugh. Hermione should have let Draco hex the stupid... *insert explicatives here* It is nice that Harry came back to make it all up to Draco though. So cute. I loved the reassurances before the match. Very nice and sweet with them. But seriously... does Harry need constantly laid lol.
Ch. 18 - I hope there isn't too bad of something going to happen since they defied Madam Safiya Bellatrix Carrow. I loved the hot little sex scene between them. Oh god.. Harry is such a hot submissive. Don't believe me... ask Ron... he creates whole strategies around that fact. lol. I am happy Draco won the match with the new stipulations. I was afraid for a moment that he hadn't.
Ch. 19 - Is some of that darkness still in Draco or did they destroy it? I wasn't sure, but I will just re-read it when I am less tired. Oh gosh... they are so happy together. I really hope that Madam S.B.C. won't give them too many problems. He keeps thinking 'its time' and so I know you are getting closer to the end and I can't help but to be very curious. I am happy him and Blaise were just friends, but poor Blaise. He needs someone to take care of him and focus on him considering all those mental issues. I am surprised he took the ring with the Malfoy crest on it. I am wondering why he decided to show the ring now and if it has something to do with what is about to happen.
Can't wait for the next update! I am curious as to how this is going to go and end. I hope you don't kill one of them off.
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October 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I thought he won and now he had paid his debt? What did I miss? I hope Harry sees through all this better than I seem to be and saves Draco or keeps him or gets him away from whatever/whoever. Maybe I'm just confused because I'm not used to Draco being the tough guy.