rate_review Reviews

I like a lot of kinks. I do NOT like dickgirls...

Could you maybe upload a version with a different sex scene? I don't think Harry got any bonusses from stroking a dick, so...

Besides, I've never heard of ogres or the likes that are hermaphroditic.

What did you mean by unknown attraction lvl with the gnomes? What they are attracted to? Are they like Gnome of MGQ? Will he get the Elementals of MGQ as power ups/enhancements (passive or activation)?

If he were to screw another gnome would he get another choice for the three abilities? Based on what was said it sounds like it would be a yes based on Diminutive mentioning multiple tiers (stacks). Unless that referred to getting it via other monsters. I can see a few real life uses for it if he controls his size adjustment (when he becomes small and when he has multiple instances of it, how small he gets)

Is charisma a mental trait in this?

Will he get larger (physically and sexually as in height and penis size)? He is young so that is a yes on that front, but I mean by game mechanics. Would better physical stats improve things?

Forgot to mention last review but thanks for the fic!

Is Luna wearing glasses because she foresaw Harry with his kink? Does she know the world is a game for Harry?

Why didn

Herm Ogre DO NOT WANT!

You want to go that route, just have it evolve further. Vampire and now this one, give in to your true nature; have Harry become Ron and/or Draco's MPREG baby's "mother". After reading this, we all know you want to.

Keep up the good work with the alternative girls, there's already enough of Dom Harry ruling over every girl in the universe, but yours is unique, a futa girl was a nice addition.

So now I'm just waiting for the ogre to fuck Harry. I love what you've done with the story so far, I've been checking back everyday for updates. I have to admit, it is a refreshing change of pace compared to the stories I normally see floating around. Congrats on the success.

Oh, and for the record, I loved the vampire scene. I thought it was tastefully done. Most fics just have Harry dominating all the time or submitting all the time. I like the way your story portrays him submitting to an obviously stronger opponent but not completely giving up. That's been one of the toughest things for me as a writer to balance out, just how far a character should submit before you go too far and its not quite realistic anymore. I'm quite anxious for the next update, can't wait to see what other creatures you can bring into this.

Damn... I was hoping he would pick Bottomless Balls (tis one of my favourite kinks). Oh well! You can't have everything, and Harry's choice makes more sense. Still checking for updates ever day.

Not really related to the story: wtf is up with some of your reviewers?

Damn, man. Must you introduce every fetish? Futa, don't like. I do hope that's the absolute last we'll see of that kink. I also hope that Harry didn't enjoy it and decides to never ever do something with them again.

Darn was hoping for fertility.