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cool story, since you asked some ideas

Naga: snake woman, could tie into the basilisk,
Mermaid: they're in Black lake so why not?
Wood elf: find them in the Forbidden forest, have Luna or Naomi help in finding them as they're fae

Harry finds out that he can redo a conquest bonus for a species as long as it's a new unconquered partner of the same species. Allows Harry to get skipped bonuses or stack already taken bonuses.

Nora develops her hoarding compulsion to get Harry new conquests, as she'll live for millennia she wants Harry to make lots of babies (even if he doesn't want to) so there'll aways be some of Harry around. Also takes up potions to make the antidote for the sterility potion, backfires in different ways.

Harry develops mind control powers after his revenge on the vampire, constitution checked, bigger the difference the more control, from no influence at all, all the way to willingly signing a slavery contract.

Harry discovers a meta-quest the Heart of Hogwarts, The four founders of Hogwarts have each have a quest, upon completing the quest Harry gets a key to the Heart of Hogwarts. After gathering all four keys Harry does a final quest to get into the Heart Chamber to battle with the Guardian of Hogwarts to gain control of the Heart. When he has control he can reshape reality in Hogwarts however he wants. Example: Harry makes the witches uniform shoes, socks, a tie, and a warming charm and that's it, and no one will think it weird because that's the way its always been.

Hope the ideas help

Just wanted to say I'm glad you're not bothered by the negative feedback. Your sexual encounters have variety and are well-written, the relationships are nicely done, and Harry's believable. If people can't handle a bit of adventurous sex they're on the wrong bloody website. Keep up the good work. A full-on RPG video game story like this isn't the easiest thing to plan out, and so far you're doing a really excellent job of keeping it lively and coherent. I just hope you've got all the stats and perks stored up in spreadsheets so that it'll all make sense further down the line :)

Liked the chapter. I'll admit that it was short but I understand that it was necessary to move the story along. With how much the last few chapters focused on sex with different creatures, I suppose it was necessary to have one that had more of a focus on the actual story and moved things forward. I'm sure that once you get the story to where you need it to be, you'll be back in the full swing of things.

In response to your request for someone to bounce ideas off of and role-play scenes, I'd be happy to help you out. Since I don't actually write on this site, I'll be happy knowing that I could at least contribute by helping out in a creative story like this one. I took a look at your reviews to see if anyone else had offered their services and I'll admit that I'm not as "technical" as some people. So I won't ball bust you on experience points, make a big deal out of little mistakes or debate creatures and their attributes from works beyond Harry Potter. And the last thing I'll do is tell you how to write your story and hamper your creative juices. However, if you're looking for someone to offer honest feedback on different scenes or ideas, to help you hammer out dialogue in different scenes (I know from experience that it can be a bitch to write sometimes), and to help you make the most creative and interesting sex scenes possible, then I'm your guy.

I'll send you an email from my yahoo account. Shoot me a message if you're interested in my services. If not, keep up the great work and I'll be just as happy reading your great story along with everybody else.

This great flic, it would be nice to mix thing up with some of the human girls like luna for magic creature sight to find creatures or hermione for her brains.
Any way keep up the hard work.

Nice to see this is still updating. I pray that it holds out until i get at least one centaur scene.

I'd offer for the idea-bouncer position, but I already have other projects.

I'd be happy to let you bounce ideas off me if you need. I'm a huge fan of what you've written so far and I'm excited for more. Felt like a shorter chapter this time around but for the sake of moving the plot that sounds reasonable enough.

I really like this story so far! It's hot, but I also think it's really cool the way you've kept the plot of the book basically, just changed certain details to still get to the same place. And did I mention it's hot? I didn't know that F/D stood for futanari but I also don't really care. The story is rated adult ++ anyway, and you warned us Harry was kinky lol! Anyway, wherever this story goes, I'll happily read it. Sorry to hear people were bitching, but I think Harry would know what to do with those assholes (he would fuck them). So fuck 'em! Looking forward to your next chapter!

MORE GINNY!

hey, love the story so far,
hope to see you update soon, if you're having trouble or anything like that don't forget that you probably have fans who could and probably want to help you out if there's anything you need.
Keep up the good work :)
cheers

Love this story and am always watching for updates... do you have a particular schedule? or a forum that we can watch for when you update?