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Wow, this is such a creative and unique idea for a story! Loving it so far, looking forward to more chapters!

Remember to use an excel spreadsheet for the skills. Or even just pen and paper- either way, you need to keep track of them. Trying to juggle it all in your head is a good way to burn out, and his is going interestingly so far- good stories in this vein are hard to come by. Please don't burn out and abandon this.

This story is as wonderful as it is original. Please, I need more to giggle at. If you ever need help or ideas though, there is a story for Naruto called the lemon games. It is similar to this but yours has a better structure!
Fair the well
Tentailes.

Nice story so far.

Get me some Harry/Molly in there if you can lol.

Even if you don't, keep writing.

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AMAZING! KEEP IT UP

Jesus christ, pick a point of view and stick with it.

Interesting... You have my attention.

Proceed.

Big fan of the story so far! Always wanted more writers to try their hands at game stories like this one. Can't wait to see what you'll come up with next time.

now i think this world would likely have a magical zoo of some sort even thou we never hear of it in cannon. harry could likely without any problem at all use his fame to get permission to stay the night at the zoo to 'STUDY' the animals. an if having sex in a public place such as a zoo counts as a kink harry could end up stacking up thousands of bonus points since the zoo would likely close at 7 p.m. and not open till 9 a.m. thereby giving him 14 hours to have sex with every creature he could find. an if he picks up stamina potions while at the hospital getting his checkup to find out how much and how often he needs to take his nutrition potion he will be set. an if he spends his first weekend back at hogwarts in the forbidden forest having sex he could get thousands of bonus points for danger from that. if he has sex with one of those giant spiders he could pick up spell resistance as a bonus an if he has sex with a hogwarts house elf he could pick up house elf magic as the bonus so being able to do all spells wandlessly and without need of formal spell training just intent desire and being able to picture the result in your mind. an of course he would pick up spell resistance from hagrid's dragon and the snake in the chamber of secrets since you can never have to much spell resistance. an even if this is say starting third year which i think it is not but having sex with a dead animal would count as a big kink. an if this does turn out to be second year have harry rip off nearly headless nick's head totally while he is frozen in the hospital wing.an if harry has sex with a unicorn he could get something like purity of spirit which helps kick out voldimorts horclux in harry's scar which will get his bonus points for fighting evil. having sex with a goblin would get him the bonus of being better with facts and figures or he could go for goblin magic as his bonus which is just like house elf magic wandless and intent based. an if fawks is a girl he could get rebirth as his bonus from her. an he can pick up being able to speak to any bird as a bonus by having sex with his owl or the bonus of being able to find anyone anytime as a bonus. an if grangers cat is a female kneazel he can get being able to sence who is good or evil from her. if he had sex with a mermaid he could pick the bonus of being able to breath both air and water. sex with a centure would get him more sure footedness.

Well, this is definitely an original plot idea. I really like it. I've been reading HP fanfics for a good 10 years and don't remember reading anything like this before. I hope you continue. Very good start!