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Nice fic, I would really like to see more. tell me, have you considered putting a general stat summary at the end of each chapter? It's a bit hard to track.

Well, at least you didn't tease about it. This pretty much destroyed my interest. Not just Harry screwing a hermaphrodite, but having his "fiance" suck someone else.

The vampire encounter was the best thing on this chapter, easily. Harry should sub to more enemies, like Luka did on MGQ~

You should add this story to other sites like fanfiction, ficwad, hpfanficarchive, or archiveofourown

Ignore the bitches whining about how Harry was dominated. It was a reminder that he shouldn't become over confidant. It's a nice set-up for a future revenge scene. Hell, he was under the control of kind-influencing magic from something at a much higher 'level,' it's no surprise he ended up capitulating. The hermaphrodite comment was interesting, and I'd like to see at least one scene with one, wether or not Harry takes it. I would enjoy it more if Harry is, at the very least, in control and dominating his partner when/if he's taking it, but write what you want to write- so long as he doesn't become a complete bitch. That would be less satisfactory.

as far as snape and dumbledore go threatening to toss harry out of hogwarts is really not a threat since any school would be happy to have harry potter as a student. detentions and loss of house points are meaningless as well since to force harry to detention you would need to kidnap him and imprison him during said detention which is illegal. so harry should get big points for screwing snape and dumbledore in one move.

Thanks for the update, I just hope that the scene with the vampire wasn't foreshadowing of more of that along with dickgirls fucking him.

I get the feeling that this was inpired more and more by "the lemon games" story for the Naruto fandom, Monster Girl Quest of course, and Corruption of Champions.
Am I right?
Ahahaha~
Anyways keep up the good work, I enjoy this story a lot.
-The Reader

Yo,
love the story so far. The last kink really isn't for me but hey, everybody has something else that gets them off.
Love that while sex is a mayor player in this story at least there is still some plot plus the monster girls are always fun to read, shame not more of stories like this are around.
Ik know you will keep up the good work but if you need any tips or ideas i'm all for giving them. For example polyjuice fun :D if you hadn't already thought about it yet.
Keep up the good work :)
and update soon :)
Shadeirion

now of course harry will have to use his brains to kick snape and malfoys asses verbally all over hogwarts when he gets back. an of course any time snape tries anything such as loss of house points or detention harry threatens to go over dumbledores head to the board of goveners with pensive memories of the event and also memories of snapes classes and even go to the DMLE about abuse of power assult and atempted murder seeing as snape KNOWINGLY messes students up at just the wrong or in his case right time to cause the biggest mess possible in potions class. as a potions master snape SHOULD know how to counter any problems the students may have in class and have the items needed to counter it ready instead of just letting the potion blowup in the persons face. an when you point out that the parents, aunts, uncles and grandparents of current students are going to be the ones voting on if he goes to jail even dumbledore and all his blackmail will not be able to keep you out of jail since he is going to need to use it up to keep himself out of jail since he will be the co-defendant in the case because it is his job as headmaster to look after the safety of the students and he has been doing a piss poor job at that. so yes snape will need to get his act in line but of course if his slytherins decide on their own to go after potter it would not be snapes fault right? the problem with that becomes pensive memories can be used in court when these children are carged with assalt and attempted murder, because yes use of a curse such as reducto is in fact trying to kill someone. an harry should have brains enough to swear a wizards oath in front of the whole school that he had nothing to do with the attacks of the students now in the hospital wing and also have enough brain to threaten to sue the families of anyone who says he does after he swears his oath.