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for Because the Night

by Sakurras

schedule June 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OK, I'm surprised I'm the first review, but since no one is leaving a review, here's my two cents. This is a really cute story and it is well written, my only critique of the story is that it is so short and feels rushed, and therefore indoor generic. Also the title come from lyrics by Natalie Merchant/ 10,000 Maniacs. I would be interested to see what you come up with in a more fleshed out story. I think you could do a great job!